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Embervale Acres
09:40:23 Solar Phoenix
definitely!
Ironworks Equestria
09:34:45 Seven | Billy
Aged perfectly
Embervale Acres
09:33:36 Solar Phoenix
not sure if this will work, but how she'll look as an adult ^_^
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Ironworks Equestria
09:28:09 Seven | Billy
Gorgeous! I love chestnuts!
Mirage
09:25:11 
Lucky
Ooh, thanks!
Embervale Acres
09:23:48 Solar Phoenix
Hello! Chestnut grey frame filly lol
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Lucky Ranch
09:18:48 luhckeigh
Mirage
Here's a couple fun colored ones!
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Glacier Bay Cove
09:18:39 Arctic Katz
I will let you know when I get back on later, Sunni
Sunni
09:15:30 Sunni bunny
I'll be back on later.
Mirage
09:12:37 
Does anyone have any horses I could doodle?
Sunni
09:08:51 Sunni bunny
What quest do you have cove?
Glacier Bay Cove
09:07:18 Arctic Katz
Not sure how long it will take me to complete my current quests
Sunni
09:06:30 Sunni bunny
Thanks cove, I got lucky 2 times today.
One more and the quest's will be done.

I love pitcher plants void.
They are good pest control haha.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:05:02 Arctic Katz
Sending you a lot of good luck, Sunni
The Old Gods
09:04:39 Void Malign
good lord. My pitcher plant ate well tonight. I think I killed and fed it like 5 flies
Sunni
09:03:57 Sunni bunny
Oh come on Nigel!
I cleaned you 2 times day let me just get one more for a quest!
MakeEm Fancy
09:03:50 Ally 💜
You entered 90 horses into spec. shows for 102630.
Hmmmm please make me some money
Morning Glory Farms
08:58:50 Terici/Dino/Trish
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Lucky
08:57:31 luvky
Ari
Thank you man :D
Morning Glory Farms
08:56:49 Terici/Dino/Trish
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Embervale Acres
09:40:23 Solar Phoenix
definitely!
Ironworks Equestria
09:34:45 Seven | Billy
Aged perfectly
Embervale Acres
09:33:36 Solar Phoenix
not sure if this will work, but how she'll look as an adult ^_^
-HEE Click-
Ironworks Equestria
09:28:09 Seven | Billy
Gorgeous! I love chestnuts!
Mirage
09:25:11 
Lucky
Ooh, thanks!
Embervale Acres
09:23:48 Solar Phoenix
Hello! Chestnut grey frame filly lol
-HEE Click-
Lucky Ranch
09:18:48 luhckeigh
Mirage
Here's a couple fun colored ones!
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
09:18:39 Arctic Katz
I will let you know when I get back on later, Sunni
Sunni
09:15:30 Sunni bunny
I'll be back on later.
Mirage
09:12:37 
Does anyone have any horses I could doodle?
Sunni
09:08:51 Sunni bunny
What quest do you have cove?
Glacier Bay Cove
09:07:18 Arctic Katz
Not sure how long it will take me to complete my current quests
Sunni
09:06:30 Sunni bunny
Thanks cove, I got lucky 2 times today.
One more and the quest's will be done.

I love pitcher plants void.
They are good pest control haha.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:05:02 Arctic Katz
Sending you a lot of good luck, Sunni
The Old Gods
09:04:39 Void Malign
good lord. My pitcher plant ate well tonight. I think I killed and fed it like 5 flies
Sunni
09:03:57 Sunni bunny
Oh come on Nigel!
I cleaned you 2 times day let me just get one more for a quest!
MakeEm Fancy
09:03:50 Ally 💜
You entered 90 horses into spec. shows for 102630.
Hmmmm please make me some money
Morning Glory Farms
08:58:50 Terici/Dino/Trish
-HEE Click-
Lucky
08:57:31 luvky
Ari
Thank you man :D
Morning Glory Farms
08:56:49 Terici/Dino/Trish
yee one sec

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

Thanks

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