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Price lowered on WWW mare!!

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Lucky
05:32:07 Lucky
WWE SH Mare 350k. Accepting offers, need her gone. + j med
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Peachy
05:30:22 peach | abbi
ISO level 2-4 geldings!
The Lone Star
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EEE/EWE combos for auction. Real cheapy cheep like a peepy baby chicken! Ends tomorrow. Place your bids now:
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Palomino Meadow
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Anyone selling show geldings? not interested in any age 1-3. Prefer ribbon winners
The Lazy Ninja
03:22:33 Jessie
EEW 1/2 filly Golden bay with splash frame frost appy 35k will lower
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Maleficents
03:21:27 Dona
EWW’s 30k each.

And some others , come take a look and see if you like something you see
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Rising Stars Stable
03:17:20 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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EEE+ Wild AA Mares
Red Roan & Champagne
Cozmic Elite
03:07:11 Z
YHH Auction
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Ends Augest 20th
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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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