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Sunni

11:32:27 Sunni bunny

She got very very lucky, she was sleeping on the back deck, and it didn't fall any lower.
The back deck is stable but damaged and the roof on the deck is damaged but the roof to the house looks good
She warned the property own the tree was dead and gonna fall.
They didn't listen and the city said they couldn't do anything.

Crestwood Eq.

11:30:53 Ivy / poison ivy

i have 81k in my RO savings. now to save another 1 mil or so in the next week. easy peasy. /jokingggg

Calela Eventing

11:30:47 Cali

Sunni
Oh! Is she alright?

Sunni

11:30:09 Sunni bunny

Am back haha, sorry.
I'll be popping on and off, I tree fell on my aunt's house so we are trying to help her.

Milo Ridge

11:28:46 Milo | KNN Breeder

Sorry, meant to be from Cali lol

Milo Ridge

11:28:29 Milo | KNN Breeder

I just finished up an auction and a big art sale so I can afford some more but most of the glasses I need I have already bought

Alpine Acres

11:28:26 Lily/Alpine

Almost saved all I'm going to need for RO :)

Alpine Acres

11:28:08 Lily/Alpine

Ivy, it really works!

Crestwood Eq.

11:27:56 Ivy / poison ivy

Lily

i should do that.....

Alpine Acres

11:27:37 Lily/Alpine

Ivy, I put all my money is dedicated savings accounts so I don't spend it all xD

Crestwood Eq.

11:27:02 Ivy / poison ivy

i need yall's pay grade xD

Crestwood Eq.

11:26:47 Ivy / poison ivy

Cali

i wish. im broke in store creds and dont have enough ebs to buy enough creds

Alpine Acres

11:25:43 Lily/Alpine

just snagged a Mv glass

Calela Eventing

11:25:37 Cali

Ivy
I know! We're all buying them!!

Crestwood Eq.

11:24:27 Ivy / poison ivy

wow

Crestwood Eq.

11:24:20 Ivy / poison ivy

4 types of glasses in store and sven

Crestwood Eq.

11:22:50 Ivy / poison ivy

quests

Alpine Acres

11:21:04 Lily/Alpine

Focused stuff

Crestwood Eq.

11:21:01 Ivy / poison ivy

same

Alpine Acres

11:20:53 Lily/Alpine

Doing some RO planning *-*

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Sunni

11:32:27 Sunni bunny

Crestwood Eq.

11:30:53 Ivy / poison ivy

i have 81k in my RO savings. now to save another 1 mil or so in the next week. easy peasy. /jokingggg

Calela Eventing

11:30:47 Cali

Sunni
Oh! Is she alright?

Sunni

11:30:09 Sunni bunny

Am back haha, sorry.
I'll be popping on and off, I tree fell on my aunt's house so we are trying to help her.

Milo Ridge

11:28:46 Milo | KNN Breeder

Sorry, meant to be from Cali lol

Milo Ridge

11:28:29 Milo | KNN Breeder

I just finished up an auction and a big art sale so I can afford some more but most of the glasses I need I have already bought

Alpine Acres

11:28:26 Lily/Alpine

Almost saved all I'm going to need for RO :)

Alpine Acres

11:28:08 Lily/Alpine

Ivy, it really works!

Crestwood Eq.

11:27:56 Ivy / poison ivy

Lily

i should do that.....

Alpine Acres

11:27:37 Lily/Alpine

Ivy, I put all my money is dedicated savings accounts so I don't spend it all xD

Crestwood Eq.

11:27:02 Ivy / poison ivy

i need yall's pay grade xD

Crestwood Eq.

11:26:47 Ivy / poison ivy

Cali

i wish. im broke in store creds and dont have enough ebs to buy enough creds

Alpine Acres

11:25:43 Lily/Alpine

just snagged a Mv glass

Calela Eventing

11:25:37 Cali

Ivy
I know! We're all buying them!!

Crestwood Eq.

11:24:27 Ivy / poison ivy

wow

Crestwood Eq.

11:24:20 Ivy / poison ivy

4 types of glasses in store and sven

Crestwood Eq.

11:22:50 Ivy / poison ivy

quests

Alpine Acres

11:21:04 Lily/Alpine

Focused stuff

Crestwood Eq.

11:21:01 Ivy / poison ivy

same

Alpine Acres

11:20:53 Lily/Alpine

Doing some RO planning *-*

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Critique

July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

Former Stable

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

Former Stable

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#206055
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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

Fox Crest Manor

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

Critique

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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