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08:33:49 Fawn

Ugh those gorgeous blue eyes

Glacier Bay Cove

08:29:00 Arctic Katz

Just checked the hidden falls

Glacier Bay Cove

08:28:11 Arctic Katz

So adorable

Hummingbird Meadows

08:27:51 Bird

I can't stay mad at this face.
-Click-

The Fallen Rulers

08:24:00 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Hi all

08:11:39

I hope he's able to find the piecies

08:10:29

YIKES hummer

Glacier Bay Cove

08:08:26 Arctic Katz

Hope you are able to find the puzzle pieces

Hummingbird Meadows

08:07:23 Bird

I'm guessing he took them to a different part of the house

Glacier Bay Cove

08:07:05 Arctic Katz

Oh, no, Hummer

Hummingbird Meadows

08:03:51 Bird

Finley messed up part of my puzzle and now some of the pieces are missing. =\

08:00:36 Rapcoon | Jester

arctic
no, you made it for you, it's not like you paid yourself from one account to make it for another of your accounts lol

07:17:13 SINN~ ISH/SH Breeder

-HEE Click-

1 of 1

Nightingales Ridge

06:47:27 Issy

Yo blue eye horse irl are inteeeense haha

Nightingales Ridge

06:45:21 Issy

Oo Flash nice. Hiding the brindle haha

06:44:44

Ugh, I'd totally only breed for color if they made any money

Sleepwalker Centre

06:41:54 Walker

Flash,
oo those spots!

Sleepwalker Centre

06:41:33 Walker

Winteria,
ty!!!

Flash a light acres

06:41:11

Goodness me flashy boy!

-HEE Click-

06:41:01

oh my goodness, she is soo pretty walker >0<

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08:33:49 Fawn

Ugh those gorgeous blue eyes

Glacier Bay Cove

08:29:00 Arctic Katz

Just checked the hidden falls

Glacier Bay Cove

08:28:11 Arctic Katz

So adorable

Hummingbird Meadows

08:27:51 Bird

I can't stay mad at this face.
-Click-

The Fallen Rulers

08:24:00 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Hi all

08:11:39

I hope he's able to find the piecies

08:10:29

YIKES hummer

Glacier Bay Cove

08:08:26 Arctic Katz

Hope you are able to find the puzzle pieces

Hummingbird Meadows

08:07:23 Bird

I'm guessing he took them to a different part of the house

Glacier Bay Cove

08:07:05 Arctic Katz

Oh, no, Hummer

Hummingbird Meadows

08:03:51 Bird

Finley messed up part of my puzzle and now some of the pieces are missing. =\

08:00:36 Rapcoon | Jester

arctic
no, you made it for you, it's not like you paid yourself from one account to make it for another of your accounts lol

07:17:13 SINN~ ISH/SH Breeder

-HEE Click-

1 of 1

Nightingales Ridge

06:47:27 Issy

Yo blue eye horse irl are inteeeense haha

Nightingales Ridge

06:45:21 Issy

Oo Flash nice. Hiding the brindle haha

06:44:44

Ugh, I'd totally only breed for color if they made any money

Sleepwalker Centre

06:41:54 Walker

Flash,
oo those spots!

Sleepwalker Centre

06:41:33 Walker

Winteria,
ty!!!

Flash a light acres

06:41:11

Goodness me flashy boy!

-HEE Click-

06:41:01

oh my goodness, she is soo pretty walker >0<

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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#106543
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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