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White Pine Estate
06:39:26 Sun's Shiny ISH
Looking for ab3 month upgrade PM me
Sleepwalker Centre
06:11:12 Walker
3yo PEE-Sub 1/243 SH stallion for sale, 3k obo
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CM Elegance
05:41:25 Cassie
Rated AA Striking Colours
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NightClan
05:36:26 Night
Art auction up!
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Also lots of eee+ horses for sale in my barns! Most with color!
Palais de Lys
05:33:00 
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EEW filly 25k.
Port Royal Equines
05:28:26 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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Geldings and Brave PPP+ ISH mares for sale!

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EEE+ broods for 4k.
Skyrim
05:27:46 Wynter/Ghostly
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WWE rated RID stallion up for breeding at 5k mush with no minimum breed requirement. He has produced many EEEs and EWEs.
Black Meadow Estate
05:27:44 Meadow
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Chamberlin Manor
05:21:02 Katie ✨
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6 breedings left for this year! Freshman EEE X - S

Sire is #2 X Bravery/#4 ABLB Bravery.
iolite stables
05:11:51 yumii
All horses are up for sale or breeding! come check them out!
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White Pine Estate
06:39:26 Sun's Shiny ISH
Looking for ab3 month upgrade PM me
Sleepwalker Centre
06:11:12 Walker
3yo PEE-Sub 1/243 SH stallion for sale, 3k obo
-HEE Click-
CM Elegance
05:41:25 Cassie
Rated AA Striking Colours
-HEE Click-

Auction finishes in 20 minutes
NightClan
05:36:26 Night
Art auction up!
-HEE Click-

Also lots of eee+ horses for sale in my barns! Most with color!
Palais de Lys
05:33:00 
-HEE Click-
EEW filly 25k.
Port Royal Equines
05:28:26 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Geldings and Brave PPP+ ISH mares for sale!

-HEE Click-
EEE+ broods for 4k.
Skyrim
05:27:46 Wynter/Ghostly
-HEE Click-
WWE rated RID stallion up for breeding at 5k mush with no minimum breed requirement. He has produced many EEEs and EWEs.
Black Meadow Estate
05:27:44 Meadow
-HEE Click- embryo auction come bid on the #10 ISH LB mare and a WWE splash girl
Chamberlin Manor
05:21:02 Katie ✨
-HEE Click-

6 breedings left for this year! Freshman EEE X - S

Sire is #2 X Bravery/#4 ABLB Bravery.
iolite stables
05:11:51 yumii
All horses are up for sale or breeding! come check them out!
-HEE Click-

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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