Horse Eden : Constructive Criticism

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KPH Equestrian

11:24:18 Rapcoon | Jester

aw cute<3

CWY country

11:17:23 C

The one in my lap, is a big black cat with a white spot on his chest that adopted the family when he was living as a stray alley cat. His name is Kopi.

KPH Equestrian

11:13:53 Rapcoon | Jester

I've got 5 too xD via cat distribution system lol

CWY country

11:12:58 C

We have 5 cats in the house. All have been rescues from not so good circumstances.

KPH Equestrian

11:11:43 Rapcoon | Jester

he is strange
-Click-

C
aww<3

CWY country

11:10:12 C

Pretty kitty.

I currently have one of our cats on my lap at my desk doing biscuits on my leg.

KPH Equestrian

11:09:47 Rapcoon | Jester

-Click-

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:08:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Kph -*Snatch*

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:07:19 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Right omg

KPH Equestrian

11:07:17 Rapcoon | Jester

fern
-Click-

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:07:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Superman rihu

MC Ace

11:06:50 McFossil

Yas, sounds like a good time everytime

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:06:43 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Whats kryptonite

Swirly's stable

11:06:37 Swirly

I love dark humour lol

pandemoniu_m

11:05:44 pheezy

dad jokes x dark humor

pandemoniu_m

11:05:26 pheezy

😭 dad jokes are my kryptonite im afraid

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:04:22 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Lmao

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:03:34 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I helped a man skydive today, he was kindve annoying. I went to go grab my sandwich from my backpack and found a parachute...hope he was hungry

pandemoniu_m

11:02:40 pheezy

a pair? in this economy?

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:02:09 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I figured out that a kidnappers prefered shoe is a pair of white Vans

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KPH Equestrian

11:24:18 Rapcoon | Jester

aw cute<3

CWY country

11:17:23 C

The one in my lap, is a big black cat with a white spot on his chest that adopted the family when he was living as a stray alley cat. His name is Kopi.

KPH Equestrian

11:13:53 Rapcoon | Jester

I've got 5 too xD via cat distribution system lol

CWY country

11:12:58 C

We have 5 cats in the house. All have been rescues from not so good circumstances.

KPH Equestrian

11:11:43 Rapcoon | Jester

he is strange
-Click-

C
aww<3

CWY country

11:10:12 C

Pretty kitty.

I currently have one of our cats on my lap at my desk doing biscuits on my leg.

KPH Equestrian

11:09:47 Rapcoon | Jester

-Click-

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:08:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Kph -*Snatch*

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:07:19 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Right omg

KPH Equestrian

11:07:17 Rapcoon | Jester

fern
-Click-

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:07:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Superman rihu

MC Ace

11:06:50 McFossil

Yas, sounds like a good time everytime

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:06:43 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Whats kryptonite

Swirly's stable

11:06:37 Swirly

I love dark humour lol

pandemoniu_m

11:05:44 pheezy

dad jokes x dark humor

pandemoniu_m

11:05:26 pheezy

😭 dad jokes are my kryptonite im afraid

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:04:22 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Lmao

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:03:34 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I helped a man skydive today, he was kindve annoying. I went to go grab my sandwich from my backpack and found a parachute...hope he was hungry

pandemoniu_m

11:02:40 pheezy

a pair? in this economy?

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:02:09 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I figured out that a kidnappers prefered shoe is a pair of white Vans

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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