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September 16, 2018 06:56 PM

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Hello all! I am looking for critique I

(And help on making my art better). Don't be scared to tell me if it's horrible, I can handle it.

Will update if I finish more pieces

First piece:

https://i.postimg.cc/CxH3Z298/Untitled18-3.jpg

Second Piece:

https://i.postimg.cc/nhvdRQkf/Untitled19.jpg

Edited at September 16, 2018 07:51 PM by Ifaga Arabians

September 16, 2018 06:58 PM

Andraste Equine

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The piece is only 100x100 px. You can't see anything really

September 16, 2018 07:07 PM

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Andraste Equine said:
The piece is only 100x100 px. You can't see anything really

Fixed

September 16, 2018 07:22 PM

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I think this is a great start!

It's not sloppy or hard to look at.

I think the main thing I see that needs work is shading and highlights!

great job!

September 16, 2018 07:23 PM

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Sunset Equestrian said:
I think this is a great start!
It's not sloppy or hard to look at.
I think the main thing I see that needs work is shading and highlights!
great job!

Thank you! I've been working on shading and highlights. This piece required it

Edited at September 16, 2018 07:25 PM by Ifaga Arabians

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