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Loki matches her 🤣
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Mythological
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Oh...
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and gaining a bar is always a good sign
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CWY country
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Another good girl <3
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Both my EEW and WEE did better than my WWW I got this month. XD
Moonlight Stud
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*.* so shiny
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Got a good wk 4 too
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Riverstone Grove
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Now I need to figure out an X account xD
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My wubbies and KNN are back in business!
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nice one Lee Bee :D
CWY country
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Riverstone Grove
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Lightfall
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Shamrock Equines
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so pretty
Moonlight Stud
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I can work with that
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Arvalon Studs
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Yay. She looks super promising
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Mythological
04:48:22 Crowley
Loki matches her 🤣
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pandemoniu_m
04:47:54 pheezy
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sobbing
Mythological
04:47:16 Crowley
Impressed.
-HEE Click-
Mythological
04:45:32 Crowley
Oh...
-HEE Click-
Breadcrumbs
04:41:44 
and gaining a bar is always a good sign
-HEE Click-
CWY country
04:41:27 C
Another good girl <3
-HEE Click-

Both my EEW and WEE did better than my WWW I got this month. XD
Moonlight Stud
04:41:05 Lee
*.* so shiny
Breadcrumbs
04:40:39 
Got a good wk 4 too
-HEE Click-
Breadcrumbs
04:39:59 
Yay ♥
Riverstone Grove
04:39:49 Lee
Now I need to figure out an X account xD
Riverstone Grove
04:39:30 Lee
My wubbies and KNN are back in business!
Breadcrumbs
04:39:05 
nice one Lee Bee :D
CWY country
04:38:51 C
-HEE Click-
<3 That's a good wk 4.
Riverstone Grove
04:38:42 Lee
*.*
-HEE Click-
Lightfall
04:37:22 Lee
Ouh
-HEE Click-
Shamrock Equines
04:37:20 Crowley
Yess
-HEE Click-
Breadcrumbs
04:35:51 
so pretty
Moonlight Stud
04:35:26 Lee
I can work with that
-HEE Click-
Arvalon Studs
04:28:39 Tosk's KNN
Yay. She looks super promising
-HEE Click-
Kiwi Mountains
04:21:01 Kiwi
Will more than happily take that!
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The Official Art Critique Forum December 3, 2019 07:03 AM

Former Stable
 
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Star Catcher Estate said:
I'm going to lay this down here... It's already done (based on a photo), but I wanted some opinions. This was done on a tablet that I have called a reMarkable, it only has three pen colors, so much layering with shading had to be done. Anyhoo, thoughts?

https://i.postimg.cc/CK75k8zv/3.jpg


Your anatomy seems pretty accurate. The amount of gray used kinda looks muddy. I would add more shadows and highlights to better define the horse's features, especially in the face.
The Official Art Critique Forum December 3, 2019 10:48 AM

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Edited at December 3, 2019 10:49 AM by Maqaroon
The Official Art Critique Forum December 4, 2019 03:02 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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https://i.ibb.co/fdQjWcp/art-trade.jpg

Thoughts?
The Official Art Critique Forum December 4, 2019 03:04 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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I don't know if it's intentional but the vgreen on the stomach is honestly putting me off

The pink on the muzzle should be lighter and more link, not purple

Try adding a more noticeable iris to the eye

Otherwise looks great!
The Official Art Critique Forum December 4, 2019 03:06 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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Sunset Grove Farm said:
I don't know if it's intentional but the vgreen on the stomach is honestly putting me off

The pink on the muzzle should be lighter and more link, not purple

Try adding a more noticeable iris to the eye

Otherwise looks great!


Thanks, I will think about these on my next commison :D And I forgot to do the eyes glad you pointed that out XD
The Official Art Critique Forum December 4, 2019 03:08 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/0j88w818/Yellow.jpg
Critique?

Edited at December 4, 2019 03:08 PM by Lazy Duck Elites
The Official Art Critique Forum December 4, 2019 03:11 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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Lazy Duck Elites said:
https://i.postimg.cc/0j88w818/Yellow.jpg
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I love the concept on this but For me the forelock is throwing me off it looks stiff and has no flyways or aything. I would try adding some lower light and highlight and a few fly aways to fix that :)

Edited at December 4, 2019 03:11 PM by Lambo Farms
The Official Art Critique Forum December 4, 2019 03:23 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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Lazy Duck Elites said:
https://i.postimg.cc/0j88w818/Yellow.jpg
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Overall think this is great, but the hair is very wonky.

The forelock is far too long and stiff, it just looks super fake. Same goes for that weird long piece of mane at the withers. The horses mane is fairly short and cut straight and the really long piece at the end is most certainly not something that would happen unless the horses got a really bad haircut, haha. Just doesn't look right to me. Try adding some more highlights and lowlights to the hair too. That's my only critique for this piece though, I think it's stunning otherwise :)

Edited at December 4, 2019 03:23 PM by Amera Eventing
The Official Art Critique Forum December 4, 2019 08:16 PM


Lumeer Arts
 
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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20073710

First horse avi I've done since September? (maybe longer) I definitely feel rusty, so any critiques on this would be appreciated. Will o the whisp thingies are hand drawn.
The Official Art Critique Forum December 4, 2019 08:53 PM

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Heya folks. I haven't done art in a while, and this was my first time using ibis Paint X, so forgive my monstrosity xD
https://horseeden.com/showimage.php?loc=../uploads/banners/248208_3080.png
https://horseeden.com/showimage.php?loc=../uploads/avatars/248208_3117.jpg
Thoughts? It's for an art trade.

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