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Breezie Rose said:
https://i.postimg.cc/WbwRWGC4/Untitled142-1.jpghttps://i.postimg.cc/Qtm5YnQb/Untitled141.jpg Made these in a fit of boredom and I dunno what to set their AB as...(not for an auction) Any ideas? Also I'd love some critique :)
Love this! The only thing I could see that could be fixed is the highlights are really noticeable so I would blend them in an it.
And AB may we around 20-30k for a set? Not the best with prices |
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Breezie, the background is too blurred and the horses bottom banner's horse is smudged to much. Don't blend so much of the background, and try smudging the horse less. The highlights are to 'prone' and very sharp/noticeable. I'd take a soft smudge, or even a low opacity blur and smooth them over.
Over all, I'd set price at no more than 20k on them.
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https://i.postimg.cc/c1B2fVHb/Untitled141-1.jpg https://i.postimg.cc/SRdPqz3h/Untitled142-2.jpg Is this better?? |
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I just realized my link was broke on my last post, so here's it fixed. https://i.postimg.cc/t4hQXYF6/61-BD070-E-03-D1-4-CCE-9706-3-A89-FC0-BF8-AA.png I haven't done art in a while, this was my first time using ibis Paint X, and it was my first try at hair. It's kind of a mess, but I figured I'd still post for critique xP |
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GreysAnatomy Stables said:
I just realized my link was broke on my last post, so here's it fixed. https://i.postimg.cc/t4hQXYF6/61-BD070-E-03-D1-4-CCE-9706-3-A89-FC0-BF8-AA.png I haven't done art in a while, this was my first time using ibis Paint X, and it was my first try at hair. It's kind of a mess, but I figured I'd still post for critique xP
I like this! I think the forelock should be a little more flowing instead of stiff also put some highlights in there as well, Other than that I think it is looking great! |
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https://ibb.co/Fg4LmFT Please I need help (credit to LRG-photography.da for the horse, the other pic is the oc I'm doing, this is an Offsite Commision)
Please help How in the heck am I supposed to do wings
Doodles and stock suggestions are really appreciated |
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Sunset Grove Farm said:
https://ibb.co/Fg4LmFTPlease I need help (credit to LRG-photography.da for the horse, the other pic is the oc I'm doing, this is an Offsite Commision)
Please help How in the heck am I supposed to do wings
Doodles and stock suggestions are really appreciated
The way the horses mane is drawn I would put wings around the shoulder and draw strands on another layer and on the wing layer smudge the wing and horse to make them look connected |
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Sunset Grove Farm said:
https://ibb.co/Fg4LmFTPlease I need help (credit to LRG-photography.da for the horse, the other pic is the oc I'm doing, this is an Offsite Commision)
Please help How in the heck am I supposed to do wings
Doodles and stock suggestions are really appreciated
This is a very difficult pose to try and put wings on.... food for thought on for your next winged piece.
I think the best you could do currently would be to look for maybe swan / goose / bird of prey stock where the animal is sitting facing away from the camera and the wings held loosely down by the sides. I think the wings held upwards would just cover the face. I would imagine its going to take quite a long time searching to find a usable stock for this.
I would very much suggest possibly consider restarting the piece with a different pose in order to tackle this idea more thoroughly. :/
My tip of the day (as im sure you've learned from this).. ALWAYS pick and pair your horse stock and wing stock together before even starting the piece. It will save a LOT of headaches in the long run. |
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Breezie Rose said:
https://i.postimg.cc/c1B2fVHb/Untitled141-1.jpghttps://i.postimg.cc/SRdPqz3h/Untitled142-2.jpg Is this better??
Fixed em up a bit... Are the highlights/blurring better?
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I'll def try that next time Thanks
Jellos Warmbloods said:
Sunset Grove Farm said:
https://ibb.co/Fg4LmFTPlease I need help (credit to LRG-photography.da for the horse, the other pic is the oc I'm doing, this is an Offsite Commision)
Please help How in the heck am I supposed to do wings
Doodles and stock suggestions are really appreciated
This is a very difficult pose to try and put wings on.... food for thought on for your next winged piece.
I think the best you could do currently would be to look for maybe swan / goose / bird of prey stock where the animal is sitting facing away from the camera and the wings held loosely down by the sides. I think the wings held upwards would just cover the face. I would imagine its going to take quite a long time searching to find a usable stock for this.
I would very much suggest possibly consider restarting the piece with a different pose in order to tackle this idea more thoroughly. :/
My tip of the day (as im sure you've learned from this).. ALWAYS pick and pair your horse stock and wing stock together before even starting the piece. It will save a LOT of headaches in the long run.
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