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BlueBirdFalls
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BBF Haver EWW KNN
Proven Wc producer, Always starts on the LBs! Would do really well with a decent mare!
up for 1k
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Sweet Valley
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Come getcha palettes now! Cheap prices, easy form, Great customer Service,
Galloping_Gems
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Releasing all of these W and WW
Disney Acres
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WWW TB with Tobi will lower
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EEW-EWW auction! Ending soon!
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The Lazy Ninja
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Wild EEE RID mare new sooty 10k obo
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Chase's Place
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Horses for breeding
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Shop - new things added constantly
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ISO
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Gem
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W SD boys for auction - RID and KNN, all disciplines. Some LB or previously LB! Plus some great color to add to your SD lines ^^
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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable
 
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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