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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 09:09 AM


Unexpected Visitor
 
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Ok, I'm just looking for some helpful critique!! I'd love to know what I'm doing right, and what I'm doing wrong/What I need to improve on.

All I ask is to please be honest with me on it, thanks! <3

I apologize for no horse avis, I have been doing just contests lately lol

Oldest to Newest:
https://i.postimg.cc/pVMyhNQc/Untitled302.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/vQj4yx4s/Untitled312.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/hShXN1Ps/Untitled317.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/wH3jGLDw/Untitled332.jpg

Edited at August 22, 2019 09:10 AM by Crystal Heart Estate
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 09:46 AM

Former Stable
 
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I think it's lovely!I love the hair on the first one
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 09:50 AM

Former Stable
 
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Im in love with the pennnywise
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 10:05 AM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
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What program do you have, Luxxy?

Edited at August 22, 2019 10:05 AM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 10:05 AM


Angels angels
 
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Ok the only thing I can find that I would do differently is like the multi horse one put some shadows between and on the sides of them so it looks more like they are actually together and not just put on there and the last one where the tomb stone is maybe on the horse add a shadow
Also on the second add a light shadow where the mane falls on the horse :)
So just shadowing could be improved
Also the first one i would make the horse a tad darker and add a bit of a blue tint to it just a slight one to make it blend in better
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 10:10 AM


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TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 12:09 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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We use the same app :D

Honestly your hair skills are amazing
I'm a huge fan of the pennywise peice even tho it's terrifying lol

Your eyes tho 😍
I love the technique you use, it really stands out and looks amazing

If you did need to improve on something it would be horse prep (smudging or repainting the horse) there's a hunch of tutorials and lib even posted a tutorial for it in her huge forum full of horse manip tips, I'll lnlink if ya wamt
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 12:55 PM


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Angel's angels said:
Ok the only thing I can find that I would do differently is like the multi horse one put some shadows between and on the sides of them so it looks more like they are actually together and not just put on there and the last one where the tomb stone is maybe on the horse add a shadow
Also on the second add a light shadow where the mane falls on the horse :)
So just shadowing could be improved
Also the first one i would make the horse a tad darker and add a bit of a blue tint to it just a slight one to make it blend in better


Ok, thank you! I never, ever can remember those shadows >->
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 12:57 PM


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Sunset Grove Farm said:
We use the same app :D

Honestly your hair skills are amazing
I'm a huge fan of the pennywise peice even tho it's terrifying lol

Your eyes tho 😍
I love the technique you use, it really stands out and looks amazing

If you did need to improve on something it would be horse prep (smudging or repainting the horse) there's a hunch of tutorials and lib even posted a tutorial for it in her huge forum full of horse manip tips, I'll lnlink if ya wamt


Thanks lol

I've been meaning to do an eye tutorial, just haven't got around to it lol

Ok thank you! Yeah, I just searched it up and read it xP I'll try some of the smudging tips on my next one ^-^
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 12:58 PM


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Can't wait to see :D

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