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FirstLightFarms
06:20:30 puck
Love to hear that! Its such a huge part of my life too, it can be so challenging yet rewarding.

Its about a girl that's sent to a camp that uses mustangs to aid with mental health/troubled kids issues, but somebody is killing the mustangs and she has to figure out who before the one she's assigned to gets hurt
Calela Eventing
06:18:59 Cali
puck
Writing is the best thing tarts happened to me!
What's the plot like?
FirstLightFarms
06:17:49 puck
Ooh I'm editing a murder mystery right now but I'm not sure who the murderer is yet
Calela Eventing
06:16:28 Cali
I'm busy writing this novel, its a murder mystery, but I am absolutely in love with the murderer
Shamrock Equines
06:15:55 Crowley
Lol Ceci
FirstLightFarms
06:15:48 puck
I think he's just leaning into the 70s/80s themes a lot. Probably he watched Stranger Things and went "wow I wish Steve Harrington could do a backflip" and the label was like "bet"
Tamarack Mountain
06:15:11 Opal
oh look I am 21 I think I will retire -HEE Click-
FirstLightFarms
06:14:43 puck
Oh we're pre capitol we're in the "spiraling rapidly towards fascism" category
ArcticLights
06:13:36 Ceci / (Call me) AL
He makes me think of Village People. Not sure if that is good or bad
Alpine Acres
06:10:55 Lily
puck
Benson Lovers unite!
lol xD
Calela Eventing
06:10:34 Cali
Yep! We're really heading into Capitol territory
FirstLightFarms
06:10:02 puck
Oof Cali reminiscent of the Capitol?
Calela Eventing
06:09:21 Cali
I've had an obsession with the Hunger Games lately and after seeing the Grammy awards I feel sick
Angels angels
06:07:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I also like his music
Not so much what he wears at concerts and such but whatever lol
Shamrock Equines
06:07:44 Crowley
His is good but hate how he is trying to be the new Freddy Mercury.
Calela Eventing
06:07:36 Cali
I don't hate him I just prefer other music is all
FirstLightFarms
06:07:10 puck
High five, Lily! I dont understand the hate lol but he did make a really funny music video about it
Alpine Acres
06:06:32 Lily
puck
I love his music too :D
Calela Eventing
06:05:48 Cali
I actually can't with Benson Boone
FirstLightFarms
06:05:43 puck
Oh I love his music he's got an incredible voice

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FirstLightFarms
06:20:30 puck
Love to hear that! Its such a huge part of my life too, it can be so challenging yet rewarding.

Its about a girl that's sent to a camp that uses mustangs to aid with mental health/troubled kids issues, but somebody is killing the mustangs and she has to figure out who before the one she's assigned to gets hurt
Calela Eventing
06:18:59 Cali
puck
Writing is the best thing tarts happened to me!
What's the plot like?
FirstLightFarms
06:17:49 puck
Ooh I'm editing a murder mystery right now but I'm not sure who the murderer is yet
Calela Eventing
06:16:28 Cali
I'm busy writing this novel, its a murder mystery, but I am absolutely in love with the murderer
Shamrock Equines
06:15:55 Crowley
Lol Ceci
FirstLightFarms
06:15:48 puck
I think he's just leaning into the 70s/80s themes a lot. Probably he watched Stranger Things and went "wow I wish Steve Harrington could do a backflip" and the label was like "bet"
Tamarack Mountain
06:15:11 Opal
oh look I am 21 I think I will retire -HEE Click-
FirstLightFarms
06:14:43 puck
Oh we're pre capitol we're in the "spiraling rapidly towards fascism" category
ArcticLights
06:13:36 Ceci / (Call me) AL
He makes me think of Village People. Not sure if that is good or bad
Alpine Acres
06:10:55 Lily
puck
Benson Lovers unite!
lol xD
Calela Eventing
06:10:34 Cali
Yep! We're really heading into Capitol territory
FirstLightFarms
06:10:02 puck
Oof Cali reminiscent of the Capitol?
Calela Eventing
06:09:21 Cali
I've had an obsession with the Hunger Games lately and after seeing the Grammy awards I feel sick
Angels angels
06:07:48 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I also like his music
Not so much what he wears at concerts and such but whatever lol
Shamrock Equines
06:07:44 Crowley
His is good but hate how he is trying to be the new Freddy Mercury.
Calela Eventing
06:07:36 Cali
I don't hate him I just prefer other music is all
FirstLightFarms
06:07:10 puck
High five, Lily! I dont understand the hate lol but he did make a really funny music video about it
Alpine Acres
06:06:32 Lily
puck
I love his music too :D
Calela Eventing
06:05:48 Cali
I actually can't with Benson Boone
FirstLightFarms
06:05:43 puck
Oh I love his music he's got an incredible voice

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Art criticism January 13, 2024 02:57 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Please offer me advice! Working on ibis paint with an iPad and stylus
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Edited at January 13, 2024 02:59 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 02:55 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Still looking for advice + pricing suggestions. Thank you :)
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:07 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Doubt post sorry!

Edited at January 16, 2024 03:30 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:16 PM


Amethyst Ranch
 
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I'd definitely say you could be in low tier 1 :) The hair in piece 1 and 3 is amazing <3
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:22 PM


The Unknown
 
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The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.

Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:24 PM


Sweetwater Creek
 
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I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:31 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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The Unknown said:

The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.



I repaint the whole horse depending if I like the face or not lol.
I would love shadow advice - I can never place them right I think I just don't understand light xD
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:32 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Sweetwater Creek said:
I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!


Awesome thanks a million! I really neglect the bodies of my horses which is totally my bad
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:38 PM


Zomb
 
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I personally would say high T2. I love the feel of them! But as stated above, the shadowing feels off for me. I like the lighting on the horse, some soft shadows would define them even more (if you haven't already). Along side the lack of definition in the body with muscles etc etc. but that's easily fixable with a chalk pen + a soft light layer (one for light another for shadows). I think if you could work on those two (happy to help where I can) you definitely would be T1 without a doubt :)
Art criticism March 31, 2024 02:21 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Really interested for critique and thought on this:

Based on this forum I tried to focus on muscling through the body. I hope I've improved a bit.

Edited at June 2, 2024 07:37 AM by Enoki Valley

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