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Angels angels

07:58:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Lily
Oh how fun! :3
Is it super pretty there?

Sorrelwood Acres

07:58:31

Okay thank you

Alpine Acres

07:57:56 Lily/Alpine

Angel, I'm currently in Bangalore, India! Only for a few more days though, before returning home

Alpine Acres

07:57:21 Lily/Alpine

Beat me to it Angel lol xD

Alpine Acres

07:57:11 Lily/Alpine

Sorrelwood, you need to go into the section of the forum that you want to add your forum post to, and scroll down to the bottom of the page. There's a box where you can add your title and text :)

Angels angels

07:56:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Lily
Where do you live if you don't mind me asking? Lol
I am in Georgia in the US and it is almost 9:00

Angels angels

07:56:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Sorrelwood
Just go to the forums under Community > Forums
Click on the topic that is what your forum will be about then at the bottom there will be a text box to create a post

Alpine Acres

07:55:43 Lily/Alpine

18:25 :)

Angels angels

07:55:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Lol Lily
What time is it for you?

Alpine Acres

07:54:39 Lily/Alpine

Angel, it's evening for me lol

Sorrelwood Acres

07:54:31

Can someone explain to me on how to make a forum?

Angels angels

07:48:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Chat is quiet this morning

KNN_Pride

07:20:09 Hunting

ZEZ
thank you! I was like, how am i supposed to do this on a computer

pandemoniu_m

07:19:27 pheezy

just like that: At. same with the dominant creme allele Ccr

ZequineZ

07:19:16 ZEZ - ZZ

I think you just type it as At but don’t quote me

KNN_Pride

07:18:07 Hunting

for the gene practice, how do we use the allele "At"? because the T is subscripted(I doubt thats the right word)

ZequineZ

07:17:08 ZEZ - ZZ

25% chance of silver my ass .-. 10 horses captured 1 is silver lol

Santana Rising

06:06:03 San

That's a lovely filly ajd there's never too many RbRbs in the game!

Seagrape Stables

05:48:01 Secret Capp

Oh gotta love questing wins LOL -HEE Click-

Santana Rising

05:00:21 San

-HEE Click- when you have a quest for a PP aTobi foal...

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Angels angels

07:58:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Lily
Oh how fun! :3
Is it super pretty there?

Sorrelwood Acres

07:58:31

Okay thank you

Alpine Acres

07:57:56 Lily/Alpine

Angel, I'm currently in Bangalore, India! Only for a few more days though, before returning home

Alpine Acres

07:57:21 Lily/Alpine

Beat me to it Angel lol xD

Alpine Acres

07:57:11 Lily/Alpine

Sorrelwood, you need to go into the section of the forum that you want to add your forum post to, and scroll down to the bottom of the page. There's a box where you can add your title and text :)

Angels angels

07:56:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Lily
Where do you live if you don't mind me asking? Lol
I am in Georgia in the US and it is almost 9:00

Angels angels

07:56:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Sorrelwood
Just go to the forums under Community > Forums
Click on the topic that is what your forum will be about then at the bottom there will be a text box to create a post

Alpine Acres

07:55:43 Lily/Alpine

18:25 :)

Angels angels

07:55:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Lol Lily
What time is it for you?

Alpine Acres

07:54:39 Lily/Alpine

Angel, it's evening for me lol

Sorrelwood Acres

07:54:31

Can someone explain to me on how to make a forum?

Angels angels

07:48:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Chat is quiet this morning

KNN_Pride

07:20:09 Hunting

ZEZ
thank you! I was like, how am i supposed to do this on a computer

pandemoniu_m

07:19:27 pheezy

just like that: At. same with the dominant creme allele Ccr

ZequineZ

07:19:16 ZEZ - ZZ

I think you just type it as At but don’t quote me

KNN_Pride

07:18:07 Hunting

for the gene practice, how do we use the allele "At"? because the T is subscripted(I doubt thats the right word)

ZequineZ

07:17:08 ZEZ - ZZ

25% chance of silver my ass .-. 10 horses captured 1 is silver lol

Santana Rising

06:06:03 San

That's a lovely filly ajd there's never too many RbRbs in the game!

Seagrape Stables

05:48:01 Secret Capp

Oh gotta love questing wins LOL -HEE Click-

Santana Rising

05:00:21 San

-HEE Click- when you have a quest for a PP aTobi foal...

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Critique

March 25, 2019 02:45 PM

Zephyr Elites

Posts: 4154
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Would love some critique on my most recent pieces.

*Click for better quality*

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WEW5xx.jpg

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WTfdVT.jpg

Also I currently have my prices set at 35k for a horse avatar, just wanted to know if you guys think thats too high.

Thanks.

Edited at March 25, 2019 03:02 PM by Zephyr Elites

Critique

March 25, 2019 02:58 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#339707
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Hmm I can't see anything that I personally think could be improved , very pretty art though! :)

Critique

March 26, 2019 12:43 PM

Former Stable

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#340137
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For the first one, the horse looks like it's in blue or white light, while the background would be giving off orange/red light. The horse is also pretty light for the darkness of the background.

For the second one, I would work on adding shading to the mane and tail, because they don't look connected to the rest of the horse. I would also work on where shadows would be cast based on where the light is coming from.

Critique

March 29, 2019 04:30 PM

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I think the prices are fine. Keep practising and getting better!♡

Critique

April 5, 2019 12:51 AM

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Personally, I feel like the patterns on the first are too bright for the overall tone and lighting.The muzzle is also slightly blurred. I do love the movement of the tail on the second, very natural.

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