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March 26, 2019 08:21 AM

Golden Hall Stables

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I was hoping to receive critique on my most recent pieces.

https://i.postimg.cc/W1P8Pdf5/Premade-Horsey-c.png

https://i.postimg.cc/zvQLLcKk/Winter-flight-HEE.png

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Edited at March 26, 2019 08:21 AM by Golden Hall Stables

March 26, 2019 12:38 PM

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For the first one, I would work on shading the mane and tail, they kind of look like they're not connected to the horse. For the second one, the hooves look a little big for the horse. The front left leg looks a little disconnected from the rest of the body. Otherwise, I think they're amazing!

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