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The Lazy Ninja
11:37:15 Jessie
EEW RID with Tobi 10k
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Bermuda Triangle
11:19:12 Lost
Mares for sale
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Minerva
10:29:39 Min
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This guy will have free live covers up to EEE+ mares as a freshie! WWW SH, 17# ABLB x #52 (at the time, now #45) PONLB. Not trained as well as Id hoped hence going free to test. Straws available at cost upon request.
RealTree EQ.
10:25:15 Roan🦋⃤
Looking for more potential members for my club!
- a few roles open.
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My shop is also filled,
15% loyalty discount.
Maps, capture passes, + much more!
Grab what you need while supplies last.
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BlueBirdFalls
10:11:59 Blu
Pony Clear out!
Breeding stock, color, PWW(LB Stud/also the cheapest on the market right now), Elites, and more!
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LunarHaven
10:09:13 
Cheap Studs Up For Breeding!!
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P/E/E/A rated KNN Stud- 41589854
S/S/S rated PON Stud- 38443136
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Both up for breed for 500 ebs while Appaloosa Pony Association can breed for free
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KNN Stud has produced a Lp PON bef9re for those in the Appaloosa Pony Association looking to breed for Lp PONs
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If you haven't already and you breed Appy PONs you should join the Appaloosa Pony Association I did and now I have tons of help with breeding for Lp PONs
DragonFyre Estate
10:08:24 Whip
WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
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WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
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EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
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Make offers before I start FRing on RO. PM me to discuss.
Alpine Acres
09:54:16 Lily/Alpine
Premade stable sets available
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Tack giveaway!
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Sorrelwood Acres
09:43:14 
Selling a Pearl horse capture in my shop for 3,000 ebs!!!
Hopes Life
09:41:46 
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Horses in my main barn for sale.

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The Lazy Ninja
11:37:15 Jessie
EEW RID with Tobi 10k
-HEE Click-
Bermuda Triangle
11:19:12 Lost
Mares for sale
Eee+
Www

-HEE Click-
Minerva
10:29:39 Min
-HEE Click-

This guy will have free live covers up to EEE+ mares as a freshie! WWW SH, 17# ABLB x #52 (at the time, now #45) PONLB. Not trained as well as Id hoped hence going free to test. Straws available at cost upon request.
RealTree EQ.
10:25:15 Roan🦋⃤
Looking for more potential members for my club!
- a few roles open.
-HEE Click-

-HEE Click- ends the 19th at 9pm EST.

My shop is also filled,
15% loyalty discount.
Maps, capture passes, + much more!
Grab what you need while supplies last.
-HEE Click-
BlueBirdFalls
10:11:59 Blu
Pony Clear out!
Breeding stock, color, PWW(LB Stud/also the cheapest on the market right now), Elites, and more!
-HEE Click-
LunarHaven
10:09:13 
Cheap Studs Up For Breeding!!
----
P/E/E/A rated KNN Stud- 41589854
S/S/S rated PON Stud- 38443136
----
Both up for breed for 500 ebs while Appaloosa Pony Association can breed for free
----
KNN Stud has produced a Lp PON bef9re for those in the Appaloosa Pony Association looking to breed for Lp PONs
----
If you haven't already and you breed Appy PONs you should join the Appaloosa Pony Association I did and now I have tons of help with breeding for Lp PONs
DragonFyre Estate
10:08:24 Whip
WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
-HEE Click-
WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
-HEE Click-
EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
-HEE Click-
Make offers before I start FRing on RO. PM me to discuss.
Alpine Acres
09:54:16 Lily/Alpine
Premade stable sets available
-HEE Click-

Tack giveaway!
-HEE Click-
Sorrelwood Acres
09:43:14 
Selling a Pearl horse capture in my shop for 3,000 ebs!!!
Hopes Life
09:41:46 
-HEE Click-

Horses in my main barn for sale.

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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