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BlueBirdFalls
07:01:35 Blu
ISO Horse avi Art!
PM me with links to your art! and prices!
Horse: -HEE Click-
Cozmic Elite
06:55:36 Z
-HEE Click-
Filly Sven and a dressage Medallion for sale
ZequineZ
06:44:08 ZEZ - ZZ
PEE mares for auction, all must go! 500 starting bid on all
-HEE Click-
Paradise Stables
05:28:48 Ariel / Tara
1. Check out my sales barn (lots of bravery girlies):
-HEE Click-

2. Studs available here (or DM for straws):
-HEE Click-

3. Visit my items & decors shop:
-HEE Click-
Purestables
05:14:22 
Starlight night -HEE Click-

Selling 1 upgrade pm me now before its gone
Fluffy's Cosy Home
04:08:44 Fluffy
I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-
Black Meadow Estate
03:19:44 Meadow
-HEE Click-
Items for sale including 2 maps returning buyers get 5% discount
Valhalla Acreage
03:15:41 Eivor
-HEE Click-
Items and decor for sale including 5 maps returning buyers get 10% discount
Lunalovegood
02:59:12 Loony
Giving away some free horses (First come first serve) PM to claim
Cozmic Elite
01:02:53 Z
-HEE Click-
Selling
Filly sven
Dressage Medallion
In my shop

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Critiques? November 21, 2017 11:01 PM


Casanova
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

Former Stable
 
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OMG!! Love It!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

Former Stable
 
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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM


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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!




Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!


Thanks <3
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

Former Stable
 
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how do you make art?
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:38 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:53 PM


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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)


I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:23 PM


Hollow Tree Acres
 
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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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