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Angels angels
02:20:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Week 7 or 8
Week 8 would be the week after RO
ArcticLights
02:19:59 Ceci / (Call me) AL
And she gets her w7 on RO
ArcticLights
02:19:42 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Old River, I would honestly wait for her w7 before tossing her to anyone
Angels angels
02:19:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel
You will probably have to wait until after RO to match her lol
Old River Ranch
02:18:11 Old River /ORR
-HEE Click-
I have no clue who to throw her at.
Fantasy Horses
02:14:02 Fantasy | Fanta
Ceci
Yeah, that's what I've been looking at.
Angels angels
02:13:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena
Oof lol
I have my matches ready too
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ArcticLights
02:12:11 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Maybe take a look at the jumping leaderboard?
Sunset River Arabian
02:11:57 Athena - AAs
I'm aboyt to be flooded with bays lol
Fantasy Horses
02:11:33 Fantasy | Fanta
Ceci
Okay, I'll keep looking. Thanks!
Sunset River Arabian
02:11:10 Athena - AAs
Finally got all my matches laid out
-HEE Click-
Fantasy Horses
02:11:10 Fantasy | Fanta
Perfect, that works well lol. Just trying to see who she likes for now.
ArcticLights
02:11:05 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I would more try to either find a bettr matching boy
Angels angels
02:09:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Well yeah I see what you mean. Based on his production too I wouldn't waste a glass on it
Fantasy Horses
02:08:47 Fantasy | Fanta
I don't even know if I should try because she's never produced higher than a EWE and I don't know her training. I have enough store credits but have been saving them.
Angels angels
02:06:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Definitely
Fantasy Horses
02:05:58 Fantasy | Fanta
-HEE Click-
If I use an item on this, I should do Scp, right?
Emberglow Ranch
02:01:31 Ember
I don't even know what counts as a good amount but its about 263k
Angels angels
02:00:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nah all my ebs go towards RO prep lol
Fantasy Horses
01:59:57 Fantasy | Fanta
Ember
Yeah I wish I could say that about my money lol. Some art is so good that I'll give up my RO savings for it lol

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Angels angels
02:20:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Week 7 or 8
Week 8 would be the week after RO
ArcticLights
02:19:59 Ceci / (Call me) AL
And she gets her w7 on RO
ArcticLights
02:19:42 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Old River, I would honestly wait for her w7 before tossing her to anyone
Angels angels
02:19:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel
You will probably have to wait until after RO to match her lol
Old River Ranch
02:18:11 Old River /ORR
-HEE Click-
I have no clue who to throw her at.
Fantasy Horses
02:14:02 Fantasy | Fanta
Ceci
Yeah, that's what I've been looking at.
Angels angels
02:13:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena
Oof lol
I have my matches ready too
-HEE Click-
ArcticLights
02:12:11 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Maybe take a look at the jumping leaderboard?
Sunset River Arabian
02:11:57 Athena - AAs
I'm aboyt to be flooded with bays lol
Fantasy Horses
02:11:33 Fantasy | Fanta
Ceci
Okay, I'll keep looking. Thanks!
Sunset River Arabian
02:11:10 Athena - AAs
Finally got all my matches laid out
-HEE Click-
Fantasy Horses
02:11:10 Fantasy | Fanta
Perfect, that works well lol. Just trying to see who she likes for now.
ArcticLights
02:11:05 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I would more try to either find a bettr matching boy
Angels angels
02:09:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Well yeah I see what you mean. Based on his production too I wouldn't waste a glass on it
Fantasy Horses
02:08:47 Fantasy | Fanta
I don't even know if I should try because she's never produced higher than a EWE and I don't know her training. I have enough store credits but have been saving them.
Angels angels
02:06:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Definitely
Fantasy Horses
02:05:58 Fantasy | Fanta
-HEE Click-
If I use an item on this, I should do Scp, right?
Emberglow Ranch
02:01:31 Ember
I don't even know what counts as a good amount but its about 263k
Angels angels
02:00:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nah all my ebs go towards RO prep lol
Fantasy Horses
01:59:57 Fantasy | Fanta
Ember
Yeah I wish I could say that about my money lol. Some art is so good that I'll give up my RO savings for it lol

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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