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10:49:22 rainy/fritzi

ivy
oh damn, i'm sorry but I've had 0 motivation these past months..I can't draw anything digital now, i don't have a computer anymore

Calela Eventing

10:48:12 Cali

Ughhhh, I'm gonna be so broke after this RO!

10:47:38 Ivy / poison ivy

Lily

you're good ^^ just making sure you guys are still here

Fritzi

you never made blizzards poses

10:47:09 Lily/Alpine

Ivy, sorry for being quiet. Looking for studs for a match lol

10:45:26 rainy/fritzi

I might draw something hmm

10:45:24 Ivy / poison ivy

triooooo

10:42:38 Ivy / poison ivy

same lol

10:42:12 rainy/fritzi

doing fine, bored as usual lol
what about you?

10:41:37 Ivy / poison ivy

Fritzi

how are youuuu

10:41:25 rainy/fritzi

hey ivyy

10:39:36 Ivy / poison ivy

FRITZI
friizzzlleee

10:37:18 rainy/fritzi

arctic
same, :'0

Glacier Bay Cove

10:33:16 Arctic Katz

I would trade quests with you if I could, Fritzi

10:32:00 rainy/fritzi

Arctic
nah I quit my quests, I have 2 breeding and one capture quest I have no idea how to do 😭

10:30:53 Ivy / poison ivy

ok it confuzzled me because granny's stable name xD. i didn't think that was you but the stable name threw me off

Glacier Bay Cove

10:30:48 Arctic Katz

On this account

10:30:29 Lily/Alpine

Loony! Hi :)

Glacier Bay Cove

10:30:21 Arctic Katz

Currently I am working on two bravery quests and one explore quest

10:30:06 Ivy / poison ivy

LOOnyyyy

10:30:03 Lily/Alpine

Ivy, just this one and Circle Star TBs

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10:49:22 rainy/fritzi

ivy
oh damn, i'm sorry but I've had 0 motivation these past months..I can't draw anything digital now, i don't have a computer anymore

Calela Eventing

10:48:12 Cali

Ughhhh, I'm gonna be so broke after this RO!

10:47:38 Ivy / poison ivy

Lily

you're good ^^ just making sure you guys are still here

Fritzi

you never made blizzards poses

10:47:09 Lily/Alpine

Ivy, sorry for being quiet. Looking for studs for a match lol

10:45:26 rainy/fritzi

I might draw something hmm

10:45:24 Ivy / poison ivy

triooooo

10:42:38 Ivy / poison ivy

same lol

10:42:12 rainy/fritzi

doing fine, bored as usual lol
what about you?

10:41:37 Ivy / poison ivy

Fritzi

how are youuuu

10:41:25 rainy/fritzi

hey ivyy

10:39:36 Ivy / poison ivy

FRITZI
friizzzlleee

10:37:18 rainy/fritzi

arctic
same, :'0

Glacier Bay Cove

10:33:16 Arctic Katz

I would trade quests with you if I could, Fritzi

10:32:00 rainy/fritzi

Arctic
nah I quit my quests, I have 2 breeding and one capture quest I have no idea how to do 😭

10:30:53 Ivy / poison ivy

ok it confuzzled me because granny's stable name xD. i didn't think that was you but the stable name threw me off

Glacier Bay Cove

10:30:48 Arctic Katz

On this account

10:30:29 Lily/Alpine

Loony! Hi :)

Glacier Bay Cove

10:30:21 Arctic Katz

Currently I am working on two bravery quests and one explore quest

10:30:06 Ivy / poison ivy

LOOnyyyy

10:30:03 Lily/Alpine

Ivy, just this one and Circle Star TBs

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January 22, 2024 04:21 PM

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Hello, I practiced again today and am now hoping for your opinion and tips! I would like to sell this art at some point, but I want it to be "perfect".

January 22, 2024 04:26 PM

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Since I am often accused (AI), here are my stocks;

Horse - https://www.deviantart.com/chunga-stock/art/E-Friesian-standing-looking-over-shoulder-side-562791406

Skull - https://www.deviantart.com/lord-furfur/art/Mule-deer-skull-stock-456291822

Background (bought ) - https://www.shutterstock.com/de/image-illustration/foggy-swamp-dark-mysterious-2205789011?consentChanged=true

January 22, 2024 04:34 PM

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Scarecrows Dream said:

Hello, I practiced again today and am now hoping for your opinion and tips! I would like to sell this art at some point, but I want it to be "perfect".

Its great!,Id recommend fixing up some deatails on the skul the skull looks a bit "Bulky",and the antlers need a little more detail but overall great!

January 22, 2024 08:28 PM

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I disagree, I think the antlers have plenty of detail and don't look bulky to me. But that's just my opinion.

VelociHoof said:

Its great!,Id recommend fixing up some deatails on the skul the skull looks a bit "Bulky",and the antlers need a little more detail but overall great!

January 22, 2024 08:38 PM

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I think that the skull looks a little bit hidden and could reach down more to show more parts of the nose area, otherwise gorgeous.

January 22, 2024 08:50 PM

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I think you can see a little bit of the bg to the horse stock just poking out beind the tail lol.

Stunning piece though!

January 22, 2024 08:55 PM

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I am in the car at the moment and tired as hek, but from a quick glance, I would remove these parts to get it a cleaner look <3

It looks brilliant and I so want to snatch it 👀. Keep up the great work, you're doing great 🫶🏽

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