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Valhalla Acreage
06:51:24 Eivor
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Items and decor for sale all cheaper than current market
Celestial Warriors
06:14:45 
make a offer for this grullo brindle stallion -HEE Click-
Angels angels
06:01:23 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
Need these gone!
1/1 W CC SH colt
WWE WB mare
WWW WB mare
Pm offers, trades, etc!
Shamrock Equines
05:51:45 Sham
Oh and I don't have armor lol
Port Royal Equines
05:03:49 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
2 EEE mares for sale!

-HEE Click-
Help me test my ISH freshmen next year?
DragonFyre Estate
04:43:51 Whip
Clear out Auction. WWW AA stallion. Consistent AALB landing stud out of ABLB and LB stock. No sabino and no roan.
WWW AA mare. Has not been prioritized and is going to waste here.
EWW TB mare. Consistent EEE producer when not matched and prioritized.
-HEE Click-
Bioshock Manor
04:28:09 Storm
2 6 month upgrades or one year upgrade. Can be 50 pack rerolls. No trades
Ratties
04:18:58 
ISO upgrade what's your prices?
Horse Haven Stables
03:51:02 HHS⎹ Lyla
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Auction!
Includes:
WWE SH Stallion
EWE Combos
EEE Mares
SD W Jumping stallions
-
-HEE Click-
194 Maiden WWW SH first and second embryos for auction! Check this forum out for more info!
Bermuda Triangle
03:34:33 Lost
EEE+ mare barn sale
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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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