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05:47:56 Crowley

I'm waiting out the night in a old tunnel I made and when morning come I will be in a grove biome that's adjacent to a pale garden biome.

RFS Thoroughbreds

05:46:40 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

oh my okay please spill

05:46:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I wish I had time to play Minecraft lol

05:45:57 Crowley

I feel the hell for my position in Minecraft lol

RFS Thoroughbreds

05:43:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

love that

05:42:59 Ivy / poison ivy

im gonna poof

05:39:28 Ivy / poison ivy

im back

RFS Thoroughbreds

05:38:56 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I mean you weren't wrong the first time either

05:38:00 Crowley

Hello**

05:37:53 Crowley

Hell

Embervale Acres

05:31:53 Solar Phoenix

She's gorgeous, but if she'd decided to be a brindle I'd have completed that darn quest XD

05:30:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ooo chimmy

Embervale Acres

05:29:00 Solar Phoenix

Not as good as I was hoping for, but a chimera lol
-HEE Click-

05:21:43 Snow❆Gem

I gotta run now, see-ya!

Gemstone Stable

05:21:16 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Same, I only went to public school from 1st to 3rd grade. :)

05:10:51 Fantasy | Fanta

Star
Oh, I hate when that happens >_<

05:07:53 Star - RID|KNN

Girl I just got rid of my breed a brindle quest this morning that I held onto for more than a week..
-HEE Click-

05:05:56 Ivy / poison ivy

it's easy stuff anyway

05:05:38 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

i do virtual school so im on my computer all the time anyway. i make it work

Gem Queens Estate

05:04:55 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

I see. I've been there. BUT, looking back... I should have done the tough stuff before HEE. :(

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05:47:56 Crowley

I'm waiting out the night in a old tunnel I made and when morning come I will be in a grove biome that's adjacent to a pale garden biome.

RFS Thoroughbreds

05:46:40 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

oh my okay please spill

05:46:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I wish I had time to play Minecraft lol

05:45:57 Crowley

I feel the hell for my position in Minecraft lol

RFS Thoroughbreds

05:43:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

love that

05:42:59 Ivy / poison ivy

im gonna poof

05:39:28 Ivy / poison ivy

im back

RFS Thoroughbreds

05:38:56 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I mean you weren't wrong the first time either

05:38:00 Crowley

Hello**

05:37:53 Crowley

Hell

Embervale Acres

05:31:53 Solar Phoenix

She's gorgeous, but if she'd decided to be a brindle I'd have completed that darn quest XD

05:30:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ooo chimmy

Embervale Acres

05:29:00 Solar Phoenix

Not as good as I was hoping for, but a chimera lol
-HEE Click-

05:21:43 Snow❆Gem

I gotta run now, see-ya!

Gemstone Stable

05:21:16 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

Same, I only went to public school from 1st to 3rd grade. :)

05:10:51 Fantasy | Fanta

Star
Oh, I hate when that happens >_<

05:07:53 Star - RID|KNN

Girl I just got rid of my breed a brindle quest this morning that I held onto for more than a week..
-HEE Click-

05:05:56 Ivy / poison ivy

it's easy stuff anyway

05:05:38 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

i do virtual school so im on my computer all the time anyway. i make it work

Gem Queens Estate

05:04:55 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

I see. I've been there. BUT, looking back... I should have done the tough stuff before HEE. :(

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January 22, 2024 04:21 PM

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Hello, I practiced again today and am now hoping for your opinion and tips! I would like to sell this art at some point, but I want it to be "perfect".

January 22, 2024 04:26 PM

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Since I am often accused (AI), here are my stocks;

Horse - https://www.deviantart.com/chunga-stock/art/E-Friesian-standing-looking-over-shoulder-side-562791406

Skull - https://www.deviantart.com/lord-furfur/art/Mule-deer-skull-stock-456291822

Background (bought ) - https://www.shutterstock.com/de/image-illustration/foggy-swamp-dark-mysterious-2205789011?consentChanged=true

January 22, 2024 04:34 PM

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Scarecrows Dream said:

Hello, I practiced again today and am now hoping for your opinion and tips! I would like to sell this art at some point, but I want it to be "perfect".

Its great!,Id recommend fixing up some deatails on the skul the skull looks a bit "Bulky",and the antlers need a little more detail but overall great!

January 22, 2024 08:28 PM

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I disagree, I think the antlers have plenty of detail and don't look bulky to me. But that's just my opinion.

VelociHoof said:

Its great!,Id recommend fixing up some deatails on the skul the skull looks a bit "Bulky",and the antlers need a little more detail but overall great!

January 22, 2024 08:38 PM

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I think that the skull looks a little bit hidden and could reach down more to show more parts of the nose area, otherwise gorgeous.

January 22, 2024 08:50 PM

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I think you can see a little bit of the bg to the horse stock just poking out beind the tail lol.

Stunning piece though!

January 22, 2024 08:55 PM

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I am in the car at the moment and tired as hek, but from a quick glance, I would remove these parts to get it a cleaner look <3

It looks brilliant and I so want to snatch it 👀. Keep up the great work, you're doing great 🫶🏽

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