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 Snow Stable
08:45:27 Snow❆Gem
OK 3rd try got a To, Spl, Sb 1/1 PON! :D

-HEE Click-
Snow Stable
08:42:55 Snow❆Gem
Oh! I still have this PWW gal to breed! lol

-HEE Click-
Snow Stable
08:40:59 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Yup, I just have to go find my horses with those. ;P
Angels angels
08:39:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel
That one is easy Gem
Snow Stable
08:36:24 Snow❆Gem
Quest Level 125
Breeding
Breed a Premium foal that has Tobiano, Sabino, and Splash White genes. (To,Sb,Spl)

Hmmm.
Shroom
08:36:13 
Thats the one I will say I'm always tempted to try and work for. I think it can be fun to grocery shop!
 Angels angels
08:32:59 [1k+ brindles] Angel
That wouldn't be an issue around here. We don't have building like that
Shroom
08:32:23 
it's the only downside since occasionally I know people who live on like 2nd or 3rd floors might order things and you might not have elevator access. But even then, that's rare.
Snow Stable
08:31:25 Snow❆Gem
@angel

Gotcha!

@shroom

Agreed. But unless its too hard to handle, it would be strength training?
Angels angels
08:31:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Meh I have worked at a horse stable so I am fine with heavy things lol. Additionally I absolutely love grocery shopping
Shroom
08:30:04 
I see a lot of people on tik tok do instacart? It seems alright, it's grocery store but sometimes you have to lift heavy things (dog food, cases of water, ect) is the downside
Angels angels
08:29:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah that is true. I just want to maximize my income by choosing the best one though. I may just sign up for a few different ones and try them out on my next day off. I am just not getting crap for hours at my job and I need to find another source for income that is flexible enough to work around my work schedule and school
Snow Stable
08:29:10 Snow❆Gem
I'm over here trying to to freak out over lightly green eye mucus. >.< I'm gonna monitor the color through the day.
Gem Queens Estate
08:27:05 Snow❆Gem
@angels

I see. Hm, which would have 'higher class' folks using it more. Less likely to try something bad on you. I think the grocery would be better the the fastfood...
Angels angels
08:23:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Snow
I am not interested in doing uber or any of the ride ones just maybe the food delivery ones or even better is the shopping and grocery delivery ones. I just don't know if it is worth it and I don't know how to tell which would be best for my area
Gemstone Stable
08:21:57 Snow❆Gem
@angels

nope, but if you could have a second person with you for safety that would be great. Also, dog/bear spray sounds like a good second option. :)
Angels angels
08:20:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Has anyone on here ever worked for like uber eats, instacart, doordash, etc?
Thicc Acres
07:06:02 
Oh you're cute -HEE Click-
Tamarack Mountain
07:05:56 Opal
well she is pretty -Click-
Rubygem
06:58:18 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
well im gonna go bye

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 Snow Stable
08:45:27 Snow❆Gem
OK 3rd try got a To, Spl, Sb 1/1 PON! :D

-HEE Click-
Snow Stable
08:42:55 Snow❆Gem
Oh! I still have this PWW gal to breed! lol

-HEE Click-
Snow Stable
08:40:59 Snow❆Gem
@angels

Yup, I just have to go find my horses with those. ;P
Angels angels
08:39:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel
That one is easy Gem
Snow Stable
08:36:24 Snow❆Gem
Quest Level 125
Breeding
Breed a Premium foal that has Tobiano, Sabino, and Splash White genes. (To,Sb,Spl)

Hmmm.
Shroom
08:36:13 
Thats the one I will say I'm always tempted to try and work for. I think it can be fun to grocery shop!
 Angels angels
08:32:59 [1k+ brindles] Angel
That wouldn't be an issue around here. We don't have building like that
Shroom
08:32:23 
it's the only downside since occasionally I know people who live on like 2nd or 3rd floors might order things and you might not have elevator access. But even then, that's rare.
Snow Stable
08:31:25 Snow❆Gem
@angel

Gotcha!

@shroom

Agreed. But unless its too hard to handle, it would be strength training?
Angels angels
08:31:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Meh I have worked at a horse stable so I am fine with heavy things lol. Additionally I absolutely love grocery shopping
Shroom
08:30:04 
I see a lot of people on tik tok do instacart? It seems alright, it's grocery store but sometimes you have to lift heavy things (dog food, cases of water, ect) is the downside
Angels angels
08:29:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah that is true. I just want to maximize my income by choosing the best one though. I may just sign up for a few different ones and try them out on my next day off. I am just not getting crap for hours at my job and I need to find another source for income that is flexible enough to work around my work schedule and school
Snow Stable
08:29:10 Snow❆Gem
I'm over here trying to to freak out over lightly green eye mucus. >.< I'm gonna monitor the color through the day.
Gem Queens Estate
08:27:05 Snow❆Gem
@angels

I see. Hm, which would have 'higher class' folks using it more. Less likely to try something bad on you. I think the grocery would be better the the fastfood...
Angels angels
08:23:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Snow
I am not interested in doing uber or any of the ride ones just maybe the food delivery ones or even better is the shopping and grocery delivery ones. I just don't know if it is worth it and I don't know how to tell which would be best for my area
Gemstone Stable
08:21:57 Snow❆Gem
@angels

nope, but if you could have a second person with you for safety that would be great. Also, dog/bear spray sounds like a good second option. :)
Angels angels
08:20:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Has anyone on here ever worked for like uber eats, instacart, doordash, etc?
Thicc Acres
07:06:02 
Oh you're cute -HEE Click-
Tamarack Mountain
07:05:56 Opal
well she is pretty -Click-
Rubygem
06:58:18 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
well im gonna go bye

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


 Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


 Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


 Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


 Sagamore Farms
 
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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


 Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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