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12:58:15 Stalker of Chat

DD
The Thomil match.. 👀

PK Rescue Stable

12:58:05 Fossil-sore

Willow I have turned to dust at this point

12:58:04 Echo | River

Put in my first stable set, what do we think?

Timberland Drafts

12:56:47 Athena's SA - RIDs

Sorry: nice of him
-HEE Click-

God is Mighty Stable

12:56:40 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Anyone else melting?

Timberland Drafts

12:56:35 Athena's SA - RIDs

Well that was nice of -HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

12:54:52 DD | ~Squizard~

*you

Dash and Duchess

12:54:46 DD | ~Squizard~

Eagle, thank yoy TOT

12:54:05 Eagle

me*

12:53:57 Eagle

well you are safe from mw I only attack West South and north *evil face*

12:53:29 Eagle

ohh lol xD

Dash and Duchess

12:52:48 DD | ~Squizard~

Eagle, unfortunately that hasn't stopped anyone yet TOT My own team *cough i'm looking at you KPH xD* got me XD

12:49:47 Eagle

DD we are on the same team xD

Dash and Duchess

12:49:32 DD | ~Squizard~

Eagle, I'm already #1 most splashed so not it TOT

Dash and Duchess

12:49:06 DD | ~Squizard~

Speaking of your girl actually xD I'm planning this for 195/6 >.>
-HEE Click-

12:49:00 Eagle

okay... whose my first victim <.<

Dash and Duchess

12:48:25 DD | ~Squizard~

Echo, Aw Thank you!! I'm dying over her arts XD We seriously had amazing ROs!

12:48:16 Echo <3

Athena
It was my first time doing a proper TB match with a sven so I'm super shocked but also happy haha <3

Red Panda Hollow

12:45:27 Athena's SA-PON

Amethyst
omg I'm jealous! My AAs hate me and I've been trying for Zz, Ch and tobi seperately and here you are with it all on one! Congrats!

12:45:12 Echo <3

DD
Thank you! <3 So is your girl 😍 Love the art you got for her as well!

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12:58:15 Stalker of Chat

DD
The Thomil match.. 👀

PK Rescue Stable

12:58:05 Fossil-sore

Willow I have turned to dust at this point

12:58:04 Echo | River

Put in my first stable set, what do we think?

Timberland Drafts

12:56:47 Athena's SA - RIDs

Sorry: nice of him
-HEE Click-

God is Mighty Stable

12:56:40 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Anyone else melting?

Timberland Drafts

12:56:35 Athena's SA - RIDs

Well that was nice of -HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

12:54:52 DD | ~Squizard~

*you

Dash and Duchess

12:54:46 DD | ~Squizard~

Eagle, thank yoy TOT

12:54:05 Eagle

me*

12:53:57 Eagle

well you are safe from mw I only attack West South and north *evil face*

12:53:29 Eagle

ohh lol xD

Dash and Duchess

12:52:48 DD | ~Squizard~

Eagle, unfortunately that hasn't stopped anyone yet TOT My own team *cough i'm looking at you KPH xD* got me XD

12:49:47 Eagle

DD we are on the same team xD

Dash and Duchess

12:49:32 DD | ~Squizard~

Eagle, I'm already #1 most splashed so not it TOT

Dash and Duchess

12:49:06 DD | ~Squizard~

Speaking of your girl actually xD I'm planning this for 195/6 >.>
-HEE Click-

12:49:00 Eagle

okay... whose my first victim <.<

Dash and Duchess

12:48:25 DD | ~Squizard~

Echo, Aw Thank you!! I'm dying over her arts XD We seriously had amazing ROs!

12:48:16 Echo <3

Athena
It was my first time doing a proper TB match with a sven so I'm super shocked but also happy haha <3

Red Panda Hollow

12:45:27 Athena's SA-PON

Amethyst
omg I'm jealous! My AAs hate me and I've been trying for Zz, Ch and tobi seperately and here you are with it all on one! Congrats!

12:45:12 Echo <3

DD
Thank you! <3 So is your girl 😍 Love the art you got for her as well!

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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