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 Angels angels
08:43:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sad my manchi brindle dude finally passed ;-;
And he got deleted
Zomb
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I have so many mares who i need to pull second embs from
ArcticLights
08:41:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Yeah, also thinking Silver Dollar
Zomb
08:40:48 
I just looked at him LOL
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Silver Dollar!
Zomb
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who to send you to
-HEE Click-
Seagrape Stables
08:38:21 Secret Capp
Yus! Im on a PATN1 quest
ArcticLights
08:35:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Fewspots are lovely
Seagrape Stables
08:33:25 Secret Capp
-HEE Click- not mad at this!
God is Mighty Stable
08:33:21 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
I'm mad at myself
SpottyButts
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Thank you! Glad she'll only be 15h too
ArcticLights
08:31:05 Ceci / (Call me) AL
What a cute filly :)
SpottyButts
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oop- i forgotg about you.. now you're behind LOL
-HEE Click-
Bridgewater Farm
08:20:28 Undercover Merry
Not too bad for a EWE color boy -HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
08:18:07 Lily/Alpine
And AL :D
Alpine Acres
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Thanks Yellow!
ArcticLights
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Tranquility
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Pintaloosa Leaderboard Association
Alpine Acres
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question, what does PLBA mean?
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 Angels angels
08:43:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sad my manchi brindle dude finally passed ;-;
And he got deleted
Zomb
08:42:07 
I have so many mares who i need to pull second embs from
ArcticLights
08:41:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Yeah, also thinking Silver Dollar
Zomb
08:40:48 
I just looked at him LOL
Seagrape Stables
08:39:48 Secret Capp
Silver Dollar!
Zomb
08:38:27 
who to send you to
-HEE Click-
Seagrape Stables
08:38:21 Secret Capp
Yus! Im on a PATN1 quest
ArcticLights
08:35:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Fewspots are lovely
Seagrape Stables
08:33:25 Secret Capp
-HEE Click- not mad at this!
God is Mighty Stable
08:33:21 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
I'm mad at myself
SpottyButts
08:32:33 Zomb
Thank you! Glad she'll only be 15h too
ArcticLights
08:31:05 Ceci / (Call me) AL
What a cute filly :)
SpottyButts
08:28:16 Zomb
oop- i forgotg about you.. now you're behind LOL
-HEE Click-
Bridgewater Farm
08:20:28 Undercover Merry
Not too bad for a EWE color boy -HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
08:18:07 Lily/Alpine
And AL :D
Alpine Acres
08:17:57 Lily/Alpine
Thanks Yellow!
ArcticLights
08:17:40 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Pintaloosa Leaderboard Association
Tranquility
08:17:24 Yellow/Cyra
Pintaloosa Leaderboard Association
Alpine Acres
08:14:13 Lily/Alpine
question, what does PLBA mean?
Zomb
08:13:38 
It could to worse

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

 Former Stable
 
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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