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Angels angels
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Cryptik
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 BlueBirdFalls
09:34:01 Blu
PWW KNN Stud
Freshman boy needs testing
up for 0ebs
✨#44 evening shires KNN LB

-HEE Click-
Florestä
09:26:37 MBC🥸
ISO rerolls pm me
Lost
09:13:15 
ISO 3month upgrade. ebs waiting. PM me
Angels angels
09:10:55 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
Would anyone be interested in these two mares? I may sell them
Ccr AA EWE
Ee Ccr prl WEE TB
Pm me
LBKL
09:09:33 
Looking for someone to help me run my TB club! PM me if you want to help!
Cryptik
09:07:19 
WWE SH Stallion, need gone! 40k takes him. <33 Has great potential for breeders or showers to train him up

-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:36:41 Ally 💜
EEE map used
-HEE Click-
Boulder Creek
08:24:27 
Thank you so much for all the support
I'm so excited to present:

The
Pretty Pony Pageant
August Show!

- Cross Country
- Matchy Matchy
- Working Equitation *
- Get Spotted
~ Flower Festival
~ Beach Ride

Everyone is welcome to join!
Free to Enter!
Win EBs!

-HEE Click-
Circle Star TBs
08:06:21 Lily
Peacock KNN mare for 1k
-HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
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Clifftop Appy art auction
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Tack giveaway!
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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


 ~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


 Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


 ~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

 Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


 ~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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