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The Lazy Ninja
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Eclipse
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Maleficents
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Port Royal Equines
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Black Meadow Estate
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Nolified
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Elysium Opalus
07:58:35 free palestine
0.0%/G1/short gens
WEEs and KNN
WC Braves
Rare colors
CHEAP sales studs and broods
-HEE Click-
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Ivory Eventing
07:51:13 ~Del~
-HEE Click-

WWE colt for sale. Open to negotiation
The Lazy Ninja
07:37:13 Jessie
WWW 1/3 mare both embryos available for RO
-HEE Click-
Eclipse
07:20:03 
-HEE Click- Anyone want this cutie?
Maleficents
07:14:14 Dona
EWW’s for auction, 1 mare two studs with decent lines come bid!

Some more goodies in here some unrated some have pretty colors come see if you like anyone in here! Ends in 5 hours.

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Port Royal Equines
07:03:30 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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Lvl 4+ geldings for sale!
Black Meadow Estate
06:31:14 Meadow
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Both of this girls embryo are available for next year DM me for price
Eagles Peak
06:21:26 
Sport Horse Focused Club is running its first 50k ebs giveaway, come join! Only $2500ebs dues. -HEE Click-
Nolified
06:02:47 noli,SH thief,bread
Cheap fillies.
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Bermuda Triangle
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Price lowered on WWW mare!!

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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