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Glacier Bay Cove
04:05:16 Arctic Katz
I am up, Beachwoof
Bioshock Manor
04:04:50 Storm
I hope he does well
Sunstone Elite
04:04:08 Sun/Sunny
Correct, we shall see how this Wub boy trains >.>
Beachwood Stables
04:03:55 
stable raid anyone?
Bioshock Manor
04:03:36 Storm
At least she has pretty arts and pearl
Sunstone Elite
04:03:12 Sun/Sunny
-HEE Click- *sigh* I seem to be stuck in the 2 up week 7's lately.
Bioshock Manor
04:02:54 Storm
with the one splash leg too.
KPH Equestrian
04:02:14 Rapcoon | Jester
oh the apricot chimmy! love that one<3
Bioshock Manor
03:56:40 Storm
yes it is
Minerva
03:56:22 Min
I apparently did mine in week 2 so I've not seen what my lot are doing yet. It's been a big boost in Ws this year though- my lowest performing freshie had 12! Ru had even more I believe
Sylvan Lake Stables
03:56:12 Tano
Oh that's a funky chim!
Bioshock Manor
03:55:40 Storm
-HEE Click-

Never seen a chim like this
Sylvan Lake Stables
03:55:29 Tano
Season after season I'm getting piles of great boys and so few good girls, it's a blessing and a curse lol. Had to expand my stud barn today
Sunset River Arabian
03:54:00 Athena - AAs
It was a disappointing crop of SD foals this month T_T
The Old Gods
03:51:40 Void Malign
:| wee. I get to write a DMCA take down notice
Minerva
03:49:37 Min
Any fillies that don't go up get relegated to broods, any colts that aren't 2 up get binned. Then they need to be all up week 7 and for freshie stallions they need to produce at least 50% Ws to stay on and get their own mares. Anything that gets at least 6 but is super shiny gets a spot in the spares barn
Sylvan Lake Stables
03:49:35 Tano
I track colts for weeks 3, 6, and 9, and require them to go up 2 at least two of those three weeks. I'm not nearly as strict with my fillies so I'm working on changing that haha
ShiningStar Stables
03:49:21 Chey / Star
Okay, I am just doing it for fun, so I will probably keep both of these
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
~Savy~
03:48:01 Sav
My SD is very lax, but I need at least 1 up for fillies and 2 for colts
Sunset River Arabian
03:47:56 Athena - AAs
Chey
I like mine 2 up for both

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Glacier Bay Cove
04:05:16 Arctic Katz
I am up, Beachwoof
Bioshock Manor
04:04:50 Storm
I hope he does well
Sunstone Elite
04:04:08 Sun/Sunny
Correct, we shall see how this Wub boy trains >.>
Beachwood Stables
04:03:55 
stable raid anyone?
Bioshock Manor
04:03:36 Storm
At least she has pretty arts and pearl
Sunstone Elite
04:03:12 Sun/Sunny
-HEE Click- *sigh* I seem to be stuck in the 2 up week 7's lately.
Bioshock Manor
04:02:54 Storm
with the one splash leg too.
KPH Equestrian
04:02:14 Rapcoon | Jester
oh the apricot chimmy! love that one<3
Bioshock Manor
03:56:40 Storm
yes it is
Minerva
03:56:22 Min
I apparently did mine in week 2 so I've not seen what my lot are doing yet. It's been a big boost in Ws this year though- my lowest performing freshie had 12! Ru had even more I believe
Sylvan Lake Stables
03:56:12 Tano
Oh that's a funky chim!
Bioshock Manor
03:55:40 Storm
-HEE Click-

Never seen a chim like this
Sylvan Lake Stables
03:55:29 Tano
Season after season I'm getting piles of great boys and so few good girls, it's a blessing and a curse lol. Had to expand my stud barn today
Sunset River Arabian
03:54:00 Athena - AAs
It was a disappointing crop of SD foals this month T_T
The Old Gods
03:51:40 Void Malign
:| wee. I get to write a DMCA take down notice
Minerva
03:49:37 Min
Any fillies that don't go up get relegated to broods, any colts that aren't 2 up get binned. Then they need to be all up week 7 and for freshie stallions they need to produce at least 50% Ws to stay on and get their own mares. Anything that gets at least 6 but is super shiny gets a spot in the spares barn
Sylvan Lake Stables
03:49:35 Tano
I track colts for weeks 3, 6, and 9, and require them to go up 2 at least two of those three weeks. I'm not nearly as strict with my fillies so I'm working on changing that haha
ShiningStar Stables
03:49:21 Chey / Star
Okay, I am just doing it for fun, so I will probably keep both of these
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
~Savy~
03:48:01 Sav
My SD is very lax, but I need at least 1 up for fillies and 2 for colts
Sunset River Arabian
03:47:56 Athena - AAs
Chey
I like mine 2 up for both

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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