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Greenheart Stables

12:02:06 Green|Gren|Grenlin

You guys know who loves fresh warm laundry? BPs, BPs do lol

The Fallen Rulers

11:51:32 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Thank you. When I first started HEE back in year 98i only did splash color but I am now in SD and started a splash W RID project lol

Boulder Creek

11:51:16

It's always awkward house-sitting
I spent ten minutes trying to find the pans, then the containers and lids
and then when I went to grab a fork - all they had were big ones!

Sport Pony Island

11:50:42 Solstice × Win

Storm, that foal is really pretty!

The Fallen Rulers

11:48:13 Storm|RID/SD Lord

In love with her

-HEE Click-

Wolf Dancer

11:31:54 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Gemstone
Oh, I would recommend taking her down until the post goes off the page then :) I would hate for you to get in trouble on accident!

The Fallen Rulers

11:30:46 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Hi all

Wild_Potatoes

11:28:48

Definitely geld. He’d be a good geld

SheriDrawz

11:28:30 Sheri / Cassi

-HEE Click- not too happy with this colt, might geld him...

Galloping_Gems

11:26:46 Gemstone

I know. After people ignored what I said I posted her for sale thinking no one cared

Wolf Dancer

11:24:02 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Gemstone
Just so you know she's for sale :) Just in case you didn't know :)

Hummingbird Meadows

11:18:02 Bird

@River, oh no! What's going on?

Galloping_Gems

11:07:35 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
The pretty ones always rate bad 😭

Gilded Roses

11:06:22 River / Brody

My stomach hurts so bad :/

Lynx Glory

10:31:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx

although i have lots of bravery horses :')

Lynx Glory

10:31:23 ⛈ whisper/lynx

ah thank you i needed that lol. trying to collect maps myself, my luck at getting maps from explore is kinda trash

Elysium Opalus

10:26:13 anti gen ai

I got a bunch of maps from explore since my explore mares are too OP
Ill share some in the hidden falls if it lets me aa

Lynx Glory

10:25:11 ⛈ whisper/lynx

but i do get what you mean about wiping the shiny colours away. i agree with that lol

Elysium Opalus

10:24:54 anti gen ai

There could have been a no- varnish or no- pangare item but
You can reroll it off easy

Lynx Glory

10:24:21 ⛈ whisper/lynx

elysium
i don't really dislike roan, but sometimes i find varnish quite pretty

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Greenheart Stables

12:02:06 Green|Gren|Grenlin

You guys know who loves fresh warm laundry? BPs, BPs do lol

The Fallen Rulers

11:51:32 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Thank you. When I first started HEE back in year 98i only did splash color but I am now in SD and started a splash W RID project lol

Boulder Creek

11:51:16

It's always awkward house-sitting
I spent ten minutes trying to find the pans, then the containers and lids
and then when I went to grab a fork - all they had were big ones!

Sport Pony Island

11:50:42 Solstice × Win

Storm, that foal is really pretty!

The Fallen Rulers

11:48:13 Storm|RID/SD Lord

In love with her

-HEE Click-

Wolf Dancer

11:31:54 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Gemstone
Oh, I would recommend taking her down until the post goes off the page then :) I would hate for you to get in trouble on accident!

The Fallen Rulers

11:30:46 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Hi all

Wild_Potatoes

11:28:48

Definitely geld. He’d be a good geld

SheriDrawz

11:28:30 Sheri / Cassi

-HEE Click- not too happy with this colt, might geld him...

Galloping_Gems

11:26:46 Gemstone

I know. After people ignored what I said I posted her for sale thinking no one cared

Wolf Dancer

11:24:02 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Gemstone
Just so you know she's for sale :) Just in case you didn't know :)

Hummingbird Meadows

11:18:02 Bird

@River, oh no! What's going on?

Galloping_Gems

11:07:35 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
The pretty ones always rate bad 😭

Gilded Roses

11:06:22 River / Brody

My stomach hurts so bad :/

Lynx Glory

10:31:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx

although i have lots of bravery horses :')

Lynx Glory

10:31:23 ⛈ whisper/lynx

ah thank you i needed that lol. trying to collect maps myself, my luck at getting maps from explore is kinda trash

Elysium Opalus

10:26:13 anti gen ai

I got a bunch of maps from explore since my explore mares are too OP
Ill share some in the hidden falls if it lets me aa

Lynx Glory

10:25:11 ⛈ whisper/lynx

but i do get what you mean about wiping the shiny colours away. i agree with that lol

Elysium Opalus

10:24:54 anti gen ai

There could have been a no- varnish or no- pangare item but
You can reroll it off easy

Lynx Glory

10:24:21 ⛈ whisper/lynx

elysium
i don't really dislike roan, but sometimes i find varnish quite pretty

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

Former Stable

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

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July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

Fox Crest Manor

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

Critique

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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