Horse Eden : Critiques?

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Glacier Bay Cove

08:39:11 Arctic Katz

I think it's a one month

Sunni

08:38:18 Sunni bunny

Cove, do you have a 1 month or 3 month?

Glacier Bay Cove

08:37:45 Arctic Katz

Mass breed approvals before my premium runs out, and then I will focus on saving up for another one

Sunni

08:37:19 Sunni bunny

It's okay gem, haha.
Sometimes I vanish mid conversation.
We get one more check after this paying us out for 5 weeks.
And I am thankful for it.

Gemstone Stable

08:34:34 Snow❆Gem

@sunni

Sorry I took so long, I had to step away from the computer...

Ah good! XD And I see. >.>

Sunni

08:21:15 Sunni bunny

My anxiety is easier now that I've seen they paid me.
It all ways stress me out because they have made me go a whole month without a check before.

Sunni

08:19:48 Sunni bunny

Gem I did, luckily we blindly picked the right one XD.
I am checking my work day from my old job.
They owe me one more check.

Snow Stable

08:19:28 Snow❆Gem

Quest Level 15
Capture
Capture 8 triple Subpar horses.

Completed: 0/8
Reward: 5,000 Eden Bucks 15,000Store Credits 1Sexed Straw - Filly

F' that! lol

Snow Stable

08:18:56 Snow❆Gem

@sunni

Did you get to the job interview? O.o

Sunni

08:17:03 Sunni bunny

My anxiety is so high.

Embervale Acres

07:58:01 Solar Phoenix

Cracked the code for breeding for specific genders lol

Breed for show geldings? Get fillies. Breed for fillies that could be good for breeding quests? Get colts XD

Hy Brasil

07:48:47 Croft

I really don't mind sabino as long as it isn't all white one ugh

Angels angels

07:47:09 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I love badger face too but I wish it wasn't homo Sb lol

Hy Brasil

07:46:19 Croft

I like the badger face I will never breed her she is a show pony

Angels angels

07:45:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oh I love her! The homo Sb is too bad though

Hy Brasil

07:43:47 Croft

-HEE Click-

Angels angels

07:42:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel

No it didn't

Embervale Acres

07:41:43 Solar Phoenix

I don't think the update to try and keep that from happening worked very well lol

Angels angels

07:41:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I even bought more skips to kips it the first time

ZequineZ

07:38:03 ZEZ - ZZ

That happened to me earlier too it’s so freaking annoying

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Glacier Bay Cove

08:39:11 Arctic Katz

I think it's a one month

Sunni

08:38:18 Sunni bunny

Cove, do you have a 1 month or 3 month?

Glacier Bay Cove

08:37:45 Arctic Katz

Mass breed approvals before my premium runs out, and then I will focus on saving up for another one

Sunni

08:37:19 Sunni bunny

It's okay gem, haha.
Sometimes I vanish mid conversation.
We get one more check after this paying us out for 5 weeks.
And I am thankful for it.

Gemstone Stable

08:34:34 Snow❆Gem

@sunni

Sorry I took so long, I had to step away from the computer...

Ah good! XD And I see. >.>

Sunni

08:21:15 Sunni bunny

My anxiety is easier now that I've seen they paid me.
It all ways stress me out because they have made me go a whole month without a check before.

Sunni

08:19:48 Sunni bunny

Gem I did, luckily we blindly picked the right one XD.
I am checking my work day from my old job.
They owe me one more check.

Snow Stable

08:19:28 Snow❆Gem

Quest Level 15
Capture
Capture 8 triple Subpar horses.

Completed: 0/8
Reward: 5,000 Eden Bucks 15,000Store Credits 1Sexed Straw - Filly

F' that! lol

Snow Stable

08:18:56 Snow❆Gem

@sunni

Did you get to the job interview? O.o

Sunni

08:17:03 Sunni bunny

My anxiety is so high.

Embervale Acres

07:58:01 Solar Phoenix

Cracked the code for breeding for specific genders lol

Breed for show geldings? Get fillies. Breed for fillies that could be good for breeding quests? Get colts XD

Hy Brasil

07:48:47 Croft

I really don't mind sabino as long as it isn't all white one ugh

Angels angels

07:47:09 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I love badger face too but I wish it wasn't homo Sb lol

Hy Brasil

07:46:19 Croft

I like the badger face I will never breed her she is a show pony

Angels angels

07:45:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oh I love her! The homo Sb is too bad though

Hy Brasil

07:43:47 Croft

-HEE Click-

Angels angels

07:42:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel

No it didn't

Embervale Acres

07:41:43 Solar Phoenix

I don't think the update to try and keep that from happening worked very well lol

Angels angels

07:41:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I even bought more skips to kips it the first time

ZequineZ

07:38:03 ZEZ - ZZ

That happened to me earlier too it’s so freaking annoying

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
#85834
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

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November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

Former Stable

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#85971
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OMG!! Love It!

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November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

Former Stable

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#86095
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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

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November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

Casanova

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#86099
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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

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November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

Former Stable

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#86100
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how do you make art?

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November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

Posts: 2325
#86101
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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

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November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

Casanova

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

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November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

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November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

Former Stable

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#86141
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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

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November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

Former Stable

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#86265
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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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