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07:52:45 Walker

lol I can certainly agree with that (side-eyes my stubborn and too-smart-for-his-own-good dachshund)

07:52:04 Ari <3

Bahaha, a lot of personality doesn't necessarily go hand in hand with easy 😂

07:51:22 Void Malign

she's a handful lol

07:48:51 Ari <3

Nice! I've heard they have really great personalities

07:47:33 Void Malign

yup, she is

07:43:43 Ari <3

She's lovely! We had silver dapple ponies years ago, I love the colour so much. Is she a rocky mountain horse?

Sunni

07:42:15 Sunni bunny

Doing risky business here haha, I got a while foal tho.

07:41:12 Wolf Burger (Leg)

But your pretty😭 Why couldn't you rate well -HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

07:37:06 Arctic Katz

I currently have a bravery quest, a capture quest and a show quest

07:37:02 Void Malign

She's just heavily sunbleached at the moment

07:36:49 Void Malign

But yeah. Ari got it: silver dapple

Sunni

07:33:54 Sunni bunny

I am getting a lot of breeding quest's, not gonna lie 3 white today.
Gonna have a lot of maps for the capture party.

Sleepwalker Centre

07:33:27 Walker

-HEE Click- not sure if I've shown this girl off at all, so happy with her

Sleepwalker Centre

07:32:34 Walker

She's beautiful!!

07:29:07 Ari <3

She looks like a chocolate palomino/silver dapple to me - she is lovely

07:27:57 Void Malign

and the hilarious thing is that most people will be wrong on what her color is

07:27:04 Void Malign

-Click- she is, in fact, dappled lol

Sleepwalker Centre

07:25:44 Walker

Void,
ooo the dappley butt

07:23:07 Ari <3

Red
Thank you, I'll definitely look into them!

07:22:58 Void Malign

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07:52:45 Walker

lol I can certainly agree with that (side-eyes my stubborn and too-smart-for-his-own-good dachshund)

07:52:04 Ari <3

Bahaha, a lot of personality doesn't necessarily go hand in hand with easy 😂

07:51:22 Void Malign

she's a handful lol

07:48:51 Ari <3

Nice! I've heard they have really great personalities

07:47:33 Void Malign

yup, she is

07:43:43 Ari <3

She's lovely! We had silver dapple ponies years ago, I love the colour so much. Is she a rocky mountain horse?

Sunni

07:42:15 Sunni bunny

Doing risky business here haha, I got a while foal tho.

07:41:12 Wolf Burger (Leg)

But your pretty😭 Why couldn't you rate well -HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

07:37:06 Arctic Katz

I currently have a bravery quest, a capture quest and a show quest

07:37:02 Void Malign

She's just heavily sunbleached at the moment

07:36:49 Void Malign

But yeah. Ari got it: silver dapple

Sunni

07:33:54 Sunni bunny

I am getting a lot of breeding quest's, not gonna lie 3 white today.
Gonna have a lot of maps for the capture party.

Sleepwalker Centre

07:33:27 Walker

-HEE Click- not sure if I've shown this girl off at all, so happy with her

Sleepwalker Centre

07:32:34 Walker

She's beautiful!!

07:29:07 Ari <3

She looks like a chocolate palomino/silver dapple to me - she is lovely

07:27:57 Void Malign

and the hilarious thing is that most people will be wrong on what her color is

07:27:04 Void Malign

-Click- she is, in fact, dappled lol

Sleepwalker Centre

07:25:44 Walker

Void,
ooo the dappley butt

07:23:07 Ari <3

Red
Thank you, I'll definitely look into them!

07:22:58 Void Malign

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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