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Epona

01:31:04 Mill$sen

Selling upgrades 200k for 3 month pm me

Abalone Stables

01:28:15 Elite in all Breeds

Looking for a upgrade

Tao

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EPE mare 5k

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Exo-M

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EEE SH 2. year old 5k

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Exo-K

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EEE SH 2 year old for sale 10k, willing to negotiate price just PM me

-HEE Click-

01:19:17

The Pretty Pony Pageant Needs You!!!

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Secretariat Ranch

01:17:58 SR

WEE ISH Stallion for sale 15k, willing to negotiate PM me.

-HEE Click-

12:58:06 Bravery + AD ISH

Elite bravery TB stallion capture, only 1k OBO
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Chantilly Royale KNN

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Roses of Neptune

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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