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Golden Crest
04:30:26 | Eve
Adding on that obviously, the horse needs to be grey, that isn't what I mean <3
Golden Crest
04:29:52 | Eve
Do you need certain genes to get dapple grey or are some greys just shitheads with re rolls? Lol
Boulder Creek
01:24:05 
All I was doing was trying to sort out what letters went with what age group....and then I fell...
into the crazy mind warp tunnel of trying to understand

Quitting Time
Boulder Creek
01:22:24 
I think I twisted myself into a knot then

haha,

thanks for the reminder/head bonk
x.x
KPH Equestrian
01:17:38 Rapcoon | Jester
boulder
the bred horses started as 1, the Oct wild started at 2, and the Nov wild started at 3 ^^; wilds are funky like that lol
Namerik Stables
01:14:17 Rose
-HEE Click- well damn wasn't expecting that colour
Boulder Creek
01:11:20 
Huh
I feel like the guy from Always Sunny with the board

I have two late Septembers (bred), 2 mid October - different days (wild), mid November (wild)
all stating they are 11 years old with different birth years.

I have a handful of late October (bred) who state they are 10 with the birth year 183

...this is messing with my brain and spreadsheets
Santana Rising
12:55:15 San
Happens either with wilds, or if you breed them shortly before RO on the first day of the month
Boulder Creek
12:53:33 
I have two horses who are the same age - but born in two different months
KPH Equestrian
12:46:41 Rapcoon | Jester
good! xD
Fantasy Horses
12:32:28 Fantasy | Fanta
KPH
you inspired me to search for dumbledore memes lol
Golden Heart
12:32:24 Gold
San

oop xD
Golden Heart
12:30:47 Gold
oop works now lol, idk what that was

Santana Rising
12:28:57 San
-HEE Click- of course now that I used all 15 bravery trainings for today she has to reveal she's WC
Golden Heart
12:28:09 Gold
Lily

yup
Fantasy Horses
12:22:01 Fantasy | Fanta
Blue
Love it! Right now i have writer's block so I'm not adding any weird posts >.<
Alpine Acres
12:18:17 Lily
Gold
Are all your riders paid and assigned to the horses you want to enter?
Golden Heart
12:17:10 Gold
Hey yall, every time i enter a show it says oops T-T
Blue Diamond
12:05:49 Bluey
Fantasy
How you liken the RP?? >>
KPH Equestrian
12:05:37 Rapcoon | Jester
bigfoot was a furry (or a bunch of them) all along, that's why he's shy🙈

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Golden Crest
04:30:26 | Eve
Adding on that obviously, the horse needs to be grey, that isn't what I mean <3
Golden Crest
04:29:52 | Eve
Do you need certain genes to get dapple grey or are some greys just shitheads with re rolls? Lol
Boulder Creek
01:24:05 
All I was doing was trying to sort out what letters went with what age group....and then I fell...
into the crazy mind warp tunnel of trying to understand

Quitting Time
Boulder Creek
01:22:24 
I think I twisted myself into a knot then

haha,

thanks for the reminder/head bonk
x.x
KPH Equestrian
01:17:38 Rapcoon | Jester
boulder
the bred horses started as 1, the Oct wild started at 2, and the Nov wild started at 3 ^^; wilds are funky like that lol
Namerik Stables
01:14:17 Rose
-HEE Click- well damn wasn't expecting that colour
Boulder Creek
01:11:20 
Huh
I feel like the guy from Always Sunny with the board

I have two late Septembers (bred), 2 mid October - different days (wild), mid November (wild)
all stating they are 11 years old with different birth years.

I have a handful of late October (bred) who state they are 10 with the birth year 183

...this is messing with my brain and spreadsheets
Santana Rising
12:55:15 San
Happens either with wilds, or if you breed them shortly before RO on the first day of the month
Boulder Creek
12:53:33 
I have two horses who are the same age - but born in two different months
KPH Equestrian
12:46:41 Rapcoon | Jester
good! xD
Fantasy Horses
12:32:28 Fantasy | Fanta
KPH
you inspired me to search for dumbledore memes lol
Golden Heart
12:32:24 Gold
San

oop xD
Golden Heart
12:30:47 Gold
oop works now lol, idk what that was

Santana Rising
12:28:57 San
-HEE Click- of course now that I used all 15 bravery trainings for today she has to reveal she's WC
Golden Heart
12:28:09 Gold
Lily

yup
Fantasy Horses
12:22:01 Fantasy | Fanta
Blue
Love it! Right now i have writer's block so I'm not adding any weird posts >.<
Alpine Acres
12:18:17 Lily
Gold
Are all your riders paid and assigned to the horses you want to enter?
Golden Heart
12:17:10 Gold
Hey yall, every time i enter a show it says oops T-T
Blue Diamond
12:05:49 Bluey
Fantasy
How you liken the RP?? >>
KPH Equestrian
12:05:37 Rapcoon | Jester
bigfoot was a furry (or a bunch of them) all along, that's why he's shy🙈

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Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 06:53 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
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Ello!
I've been doing art for quite a few years on HEE, but I feel like my art should be improved more than it is, so I'm asking for some critique on my art! I'm not asking "what can I do to make my art look more like [insert name]'s art", I'm just asking what can I do to improve and make my art look better! Even if you think that everything is perfect except for how I (example) drew the mane or shaded the hooves, then let me know! Or if you think the whole thing is terrible, then please let me know, and suggest ways (or tips if you know any) which I can improve!
All humbleness aside, I'm not too bad of an artist on HEE, but I'd like to be doing sooo much better than what I'm doing now.


I'm going to somewhat make this into a project. Every month, at the end of the month, I'll post a few images on this page which I made the previous month. Then I'll try to apply some of the tips and critique to pieces I make the next month and repeat the cycle. By, let's say.... July of 2019, I'd like to see that I've improved a TON!

I'll also be hosting free art giveaways through this page and possibly offer discounts in my art shop to anyone who gives helpful critique!


Here's some info about my art experience on HEE:
- I started doing art around yr65 (I joined yr61) by coloring linearts. (If I get enough requests, I'll see if I can find a link to the first lineart I colored xD )
- I started doing manips maybe 6 months after that
- I do ALL of my art on PaintToolSAI, a downloadable drawing program. SAI was specifically made for graphic design/drawing, not photomanipulation, so it took me a few years to figure out how to effectively use it for making manips
- Around December 2016 is when I finally "figured out" how to effectively make manips using SAI
-It has now been almost 2 years since then, and though I have definitely improved, I feel that I should be quite a bit more improved


Please note that because I use PaintToolSAI, not Photoshop or GIMP (gimp doesn't work on my laptop for some reason) I do not have access to all the PS/GIMP settings or brushes.


So, because I'm asking for Critique, I'd like to set a few rules, just so there are no hard feelings being passed around. Remeber; everyone may have different opinions or prefer different styles :)
1. Don't be rude
-please don't insult my art or just say that it looks bad. If you do think it looks bad, then please elaborate and tell me why or what I can do to fix it!
-don't tell people that their tips are bad or get into arguments. I would like everyone to be able to have a say without being afraid they'll be harassed for saying it. :)

2. Elaborate/ Don't be Vague
-if you dislike something about a piece or think I could have done something differently, then please say so! But then please elaborate and give me tips or ways which you think I could improve.
-or if you like something that I did on a piece, then please say so! Not all critique has to be negative!

3. You Don't Have to Critique Every Image
-you certainly can if you'd like, but you don't have to critique every image
-If you want, you can also go through my DA and link+critique some of the pieces which I have not posted


That's it! Thank you all sooooooooooooo much for the help!


Stuff to Improve upon for this month based on critique:
-Look for less "awkward" stock that matches the BG better
-Manes and Tails (lol this one is probably gonna be here for a few months)
-positioning and size of horses compared to their BGs
-applying just enough contrast and shading to the horse/ grounding horse
-fixed light source

Edited at April 15, 2018 08:16 PM by ~Skye Acres~
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 06:55 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
Posts: 6838
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Art Examples (updated 4/ 15/ 2018)
***Because I just started this forum, for the next few months I'll be uploading both old and new art examples***

Link to my DA :
https://skystream11.deviantart.com/
1. https://img00.deviantart.net/ab0d/i/2017/242/8/d/rm__old_friends_by_skystream11-dblttsv.png

2. https://orig00.deviantart.net/7c3f/f/2017/078/e/a/rising_star_w_words_by_skystream11-db2wg6f.jpg

3. https://orig00.deviantart.net/bb99/f/2017/240/4/b/valkyrie_w_creds_by_skystream11-dbllf7o.jpg

4. https://img00.deviantart.net/6dbd/i/2017/287/1/4/rm___sky_fire_by_skystream11-dbql4uo.png

5. https://orig00.deviantart.net/b252/f/2017/315/b/b/serenis_w_markings_w_words_by_skystream11-dbthlbm.jpg

6. https://orig00.deviantart.net/c2a2/f/2018/006/c/6/a1_friesan_w_words___markings_by_skystream11-dbz676z.jpg

7. https://orig00.deviantart.net/3282/f/2018/046/8/7/symphony_of_colour_w_creds_by_skystream11-dc39hcv.jpg
-fix shading

8. https://orig00.deviantart.net/0b23/f/2018/051/a/2/heart_breaker_w_words_by_skystream11-dc3st4z.jpg

9. https://pre00.deviantart.net/3dea/th/pre/f/2018/051/8/a/stormwarning_full_image_by_skystream11-dc3u99s.png

10. https://orig00.deviantart.net/7c33/f/2018/075/7/6/bluecrimsonpassion_w_words_by_skystream11-dc63e87.jpg

11. https://orig00.deviantart.net/4eda/f/2018/088/3/3/hee____horse_avatar___dimmy_s_phoenix_by_skystream11-dc7bqco.jpg

12. https://orig00.deviantart.net/70bb/f/2018/093/e/f/dimmy_s_asi_w_words_by_skystream11-dc7rtcd.jpg

Edited at April 16, 2018 03:21 PM by ~Skye Acres~
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:12 PM

Former Stable
 
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You are absolutely amazing keep doing what you are doing
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Your art is gorgeous! <3
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:17 PM

Former Stable
 
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Wow I love it so much! The bottom one I like the most! I think the one right above it has a weirder, like, um.. how do I elaborate? The fire looks like a stock image, if you get what I mean, but it still looks amazing! That's all I can really find wrong with them, they look really pretty.

Edited at April 15, 2018 07:20 PM by Starset Acres
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:19 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
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Aww thanks everyone <3
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:20 PM


The Dark Arts
 
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Excuse me? What? Improve? Oh my lord, dear I think you're mistaken, you can't possibly get better than your artwork! Astounding skills, I hope I can one day make art like yours! <3
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:28 PM


Helicon Show Horses
 
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Half of these I haven't seen before, Skye. I don't stalk you, lol, but dang. I think in general there are a few that have kind of awkward poses, like maybe you chose stock that wasn't quite right here or there. Specifically, I think the first photo is gorgeous except the front legs bother me because they're very strangely placed and possibly uneven to my perception and don't speak of movement, but the hind end is saying 'trot' to me. The same idea with the third from bottom, just an awkward looking pose to me, that's all.

Hopefully that helps. I'm not an artist, just an artist employer. ;P


Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:32 PM


~Skye Acres~
 
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Thanks Helicon and Celestrial!

Helicon, lol if the 3rd one from the bottom seems a tad awkward (specifically around the head/ shoulders) it may be because I had to reposition the head/neck a smidge. I'm still working on that xD

Edited at April 15, 2018 07:37 PM by ~Skye Acres~
Art Feedback! April 15, 2018 07:35 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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Skye these are all absolutely stunning pieces! I am honestly loving each and every one of these and would die if I had talents even close to yours. You are a fantastic artist! One thing you could possibly work on is making sure you have consistent tail textures though? I see some of these pieces have absolutely flawless, smooth tails but a few such as 2, 8, and 10 seem to have rougher, unblended tails? Also as Helicon mentioned, there are just a few tiny details with leg positions and such that are a bit off. Other than that, you've got absolutely gorgeous art and a whole heap of talent! :D

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