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08:41:48 Ally 💜

I havent tried them yet

Glacier Bay Cove

08:41:23 Arctic Katz

How do they taste, Ally

Insignia Elites

08:33:54 Em

I thought capture day I would finish the one but nope xD

08:33:30 Ally 💜

Im the same way 😂

Insignia Elites

08:32:58 Em

The amount of money I have put towards this quest... I would skip it but now Im just mad and can't let it beat me lol

08:32:42 Ally 💜

I dont have ebs to complete it XD

Insignia Elites

08:32:17 Em

I would have been done that by now xD Ten times over

08:32:04 CƐ

Weirdly enough I get a decent amount of Sub-Par combos too

08:31:52 Ally 💜

This is what I need
Capture 5 triple Suberb horses.
Completed: 0/5

Insignia Elites

08:29:54 Em

I keep getting SSS I noticed

Insignia Elites

08:29:38 Em

I have two quest, capture a PP and then capture 3 PPP. I have 2/3 PPP from capture day...

08:29:23 CƐ

Right? Eaiser to capture EE then PP
I've caught more AEE and SEE combos then PPs

Insignia Elites

08:29:19 Em

When I gain them right away xD

08:28:47 Ally 💜

Are you using maps? @Em

Insignia Elites

08:27:47 Em

Why is it so hard to get a PP captured...

08:20:44 Crowley

Hey Rain

08:20:20 Ally 💜

I found blueberry pie oreos

Glacier Bay Cove

08:19:39 Arctic Katz

Oh, definitely, pheezy

Glacier Bay Cove

08:19:20 Arctic Katz

I was a temporary Iowan

08:19:07 pheezy

their dessert pizza is unmatched

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08:41:48 Ally 💜

I havent tried them yet

Glacier Bay Cove

08:41:23 Arctic Katz

How do they taste, Ally

Insignia Elites

08:33:54 Em

I thought capture day I would finish the one but nope xD

08:33:30 Ally 💜

Im the same way 😂

Insignia Elites

08:32:58 Em

The amount of money I have put towards this quest... I would skip it but now Im just mad and can't let it beat me lol

08:32:42 Ally 💜

I dont have ebs to complete it XD

Insignia Elites

08:32:17 Em

I would have been done that by now xD Ten times over

08:32:04 CƐ

Weirdly enough I get a decent amount of Sub-Par combos too

08:31:52 Ally 💜

This is what I need
Capture 5 triple Suberb horses.
Completed: 0/5

Insignia Elites

08:29:54 Em

I keep getting SSS I noticed

Insignia Elites

08:29:38 Em

I have two quest, capture a PP and then capture 3 PPP. I have 2/3 PPP from capture day...

08:29:23 CƐ

Right? Eaiser to capture EE then PP
I've caught more AEE and SEE combos then PPs

Insignia Elites

08:29:19 Em

When I gain them right away xD

08:28:47 Ally 💜

Are you using maps? @Em

Insignia Elites

08:27:47 Em

Why is it so hard to get a PP captured...

08:20:44 Crowley

Hey Rain

08:20:20 Ally 💜

I found blueberry pie oreos

Glacier Bay Cove

08:19:39 Arctic Katz

Oh, definitely, pheezy

Glacier Bay Cove

08:19:20 Arctic Katz

I was a temporary Iowan

08:19:07 pheezy

their dessert pizza is unmatched

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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