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BlueBirdFalls
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BBF Haver EWW KNN
Proven Wc producer, Always starts on the LBs! Would do really well with a decent mare!
up for 1k
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Fluffy's Cosy Home
01:14:08 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

Magic Horses
01:12:52 Magic
-HEE Click-
WWW mare for auction

-HEE Click-
EEE mares for sale
BlueBirdFalls
12:59:10 Blu
BBF Haver EWW KNN
Proven Wc producer, Always starts on the LBs! Would do really well with a decent mare!
up for 1k
-HEE Click-
----------
Broods:
-HEE Click-
----
Sales:
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
12:56:31 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
-HEE Click-
Come getcha palettes now! Cheap prices, easy form, Great customer Service,
Galloping_Gems
12:48:20 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Releasing all of these W and WW
Disney Acres
12:40:42 
WWW TB with Tobi will lower
-HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
12:37:15 Em
Brindles for sale!
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Platinum Plaits
12:32:26 Payton
EEW-EWW auction! Ending soon!
-HEE Click-
The Lazy Ninja
12:28:44 Jessie
Wild EEE RID mare new sooty 10k obo
-HEE Click-
Chase's Place
12:28:32 :)Chase
Horses for breeding
-HEE Click-

Shop - new things added constantly
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ISO
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The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 06:22 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20954441
Latest piece. I'm starting to enjoy my style more! What do y'all think?
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 06:30 PM


White Oak Manor
 
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Purple Pegasus Farm said:
https://i.postimg.cc/3JYnQyxn/resizedimage.jpg

Thoughts on this guy?




Guess this got overlooked? Still looking for critique. :)
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 09:22 PM


Fox Haven Farm
 
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Purple Pegasus Farm said:


Purple Pegasus Farm said:
https://i.postimg.cc/3JYnQyxn/resizedimage.jpg

Thoughts on this guy?




Guess this got overlooked? Still looking for critique. :)



Hi! Overall, I think this is a lovely piece. A couple of notes. First, I think the cropping is causing a bit of tension. What I mean by that is the nose of the horse and the tip of his ear is rubbing up against the frame and causing visual tension. I would nudge him over a few tabs to the right to ease this and make his head more centered. I think the lighting and color scheme meshes well. Secondly, the credits are difficult to make out but it could just be the render size in the forums. Thirdly, the lighting from the background suggests this horse should be slightly backlight from the lamplight. You have two competing light sources currently, one from the back (from the background) and one from the left (foreground). I would try to even this out a bit by adding a subtle halo around the horse's head/neck.
The Official Art Critique Forum November 19, 2019 12:16 AM


Tanglewood
 
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AnimeAcres said:


Tanglewood said:
https://i.postimg.cc/3NZHNyJh/Ignitor-ed-commission.png

Thoughts? Sorry, I know the lighting sucks


It looks good. I would give the horse a more Orange ish lighting or over shade if you know what I mean.

Okay :) Thanks!
The Official Art Critique Forum November 20, 2019 01:03 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/pVKJSHC9/Untitled128-min.jpg
Most recent needs a critique!
The Official Art Critique Forum November 21, 2019 04:44 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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My most recent piece I'd like critique on:

https://i.postimg.cc/bvTbX4sJ/Buckskin-Premade-Pond.png
The Official Art Critique Forum November 21, 2019 04:46 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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This is very pretty!
Firstly try not making the markings and the hirse itself so bright, it looks glowy and quite unnatural, Tey using shadows to adjust that

Blur/smudge the highlights, anf lower the opacity slightly so their not as 'out there'

Try blurring the bg a bit to add more focus to the horse

Overall a lovely peice

Breezie Rose said:
https://i.postimg.cc/pVKJSHC9/Untitled128-min.jpg
Most recent needs a critique!



The Official Art Critique Forum November 21, 2019 04:48 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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Gosh this is stunning!
Try adding some highlights to the mane, so it doesn't look just like a block fo black if that makes sense

Other than that I can't really think of anything else :')

Golden Hall Stables said:
My most recent piece I'd like critique on:

https://i.postimg.cc/bvTbX4sJ/Buckskin-Premade-Pond.png



The Official Art Critique Forum November 21, 2019 09:43 PM

Former Stable
 
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Critique? :D

https://i.postimg.cc/0j88w818/Yellow.jpg
The Official Art Critique Forum November 21, 2019 09:43 PM

Former Stable
 
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Double post.

Edited at November 21, 2019 09:43 PM by Lazy Duck Elites

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