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April 14, 2018 06:10 PM

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Hi all I am trying my hand at some art work and would love some feedback.

This is the image I have been working on.

minnesotamom83.deviantart.com/art/River-Horse-with-refelction-740433025

Edited at April 14, 2018 06:41 PM by Gypsy River Farms

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April 14, 2018 06:12 PM

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https://minnesotamom83.deviantart.com/art/Horsereadfortitle-740430034?ga_submit_new

Edited at April 14, 2018 06:13 PM by Gymkhana Girl

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April 14, 2018 06:42 PM

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Think I have a working link now. Sorry about the last one.

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April 15, 2018 08:01 AM

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Wow, this really is gorgeous!

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April 18, 2018 07:12 PM

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Need help for image hosting so that I can hopefully share down the line. I was using photo bucket but it is now a pay service. Currently have items on deviant art but the images don't show on posts.

http://minnesotamom83.deviantart.com/art/River-Horse-with-refelction-740433025

Edited at April 18, 2018 07:13 PM by Gypsy River Farms

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April 18, 2018 07:15 PM

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It looks amazing! However the horse could be sharpened a little. It doesn't seem like the central focus when you first look at it.

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April 18, 2018 07:24 PM

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The smudging could be smoother and there could be more highlighting around the face... and the background could be blurred slightly to help "pop" the horse to the center of attention.

Also, the reflection doesn't really look like it would line up correctly in the back legs area.

But the main thing I'd work on is smoothing out the smudging and cleaning up the tail a bit.

All in all, this is a great start though!

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