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Statesman
11:47:58 Sun's Spl TB's
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I don’t even know what to think of this dude now. Like. His leveling? Good. Week 7? Good. Week 8? Not good. Ugh
Eternal Chaos
11:47:53 MOD/Trish
-HEE Click- I can live with one down on her <3
Alpine Acres
11:46:34 Lily/Alpine
The traits are:
Dressage - Int, Mv, Str
Jumping - Hrt, Scp, Spd
XC - Hrt, Str, Spd
Eternal Chaos
11:45:48 MOD/Trish
movement, intelligence and heart
Alpine Acres
11:45:29 Lily/Alpine
Movement, Intelligence, Heart
Glacier Bay Cove
11:45:29 Arctic Katz
Movement
Intelligence
Heart
Sweet Valley
11:45:03 Anna/Jewel
What is mv, int and hrt? I am sorry, you've lost me
Alpine Acres
11:44:59 Lily/Alpine
But I would find a better match for her
Alpine Acres
11:44:38 Lily/Alpine
Anna, out of those two you just posted definitely the second one :)
Nightingales Ridge
11:44:32 Issy
Neither match very well. You need mv, int and hrt stronger
Sweet Valley
11:44:19 Anna/Jewel
oki
Morning Glory Farms
11:44:00 Terici/Dino/Trish
I dont know how but my WWW colt is only on week 3 but im *sure* i trained last week
Crestwood Eq.
11:43:59 Ivy / poison ivy
Anna

Im not a genius at matches but the firstt one, they both seem to have (relatively) lower str, int, hrt, and mv. Not saying im right tho xE
Alpine Acres
11:43:54 Lily/Alpine
Anna, neither match her very well. But probably the first
Sweet Valley
11:43:23 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-

Also these?
Sunstone Elite
11:43:00 Sun/Sunny
Nice DD! My splash girl is up all week 4 as well; *finally* a good prospect over there.
Sweet Valley
11:41:38 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
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Which one of these is the better match?
Alpine Acres
11:39:48 Lily/Alpine
Purestables, they both are weak in Str, so not the best match in my opinion
Dash and Duchess
11:39:21 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm still so beyond ecstatic about this wk 4 🥹
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
11:38:20 Anna/Jewel
Iyiyiy lol
🤣🤣🤣
sounds weird

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Statesman
11:47:58 Sun's Spl TB's
-HEE Click-
I don’t even know what to think of this dude now. Like. His leveling? Good. Week 7? Good. Week 8? Not good. Ugh
Eternal Chaos
11:47:53 MOD/Trish
-HEE Click- I can live with one down on her <3
Alpine Acres
11:46:34 Lily/Alpine
The traits are:
Dressage - Int, Mv, Str
Jumping - Hrt, Scp, Spd
XC - Hrt, Str, Spd
Eternal Chaos
11:45:48 MOD/Trish
movement, intelligence and heart
Alpine Acres
11:45:29 Lily/Alpine
Movement, Intelligence, Heart
Glacier Bay Cove
11:45:29 Arctic Katz
Movement
Intelligence
Heart
Sweet Valley
11:45:03 Anna/Jewel
What is mv, int and hrt? I am sorry, you've lost me
Alpine Acres
11:44:59 Lily/Alpine
But I would find a better match for her
Alpine Acres
11:44:38 Lily/Alpine
Anna, out of those two you just posted definitely the second one :)
Nightingales Ridge
11:44:32 Issy
Neither match very well. You need mv, int and hrt stronger
Sweet Valley
11:44:19 Anna/Jewel
oki
Morning Glory Farms
11:44:00 Terici/Dino/Trish
I dont know how but my WWW colt is only on week 3 but im *sure* i trained last week
Crestwood Eq.
11:43:59 Ivy / poison ivy
Anna

Im not a genius at matches but the firstt one, they both seem to have (relatively) lower str, int, hrt, and mv. Not saying im right tho xE
Alpine Acres
11:43:54 Lily/Alpine
Anna, neither match her very well. But probably the first
Sweet Valley
11:43:23 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-

Also these?
Sunstone Elite
11:43:00 Sun/Sunny
Nice DD! My splash girl is up all week 4 as well; *finally* a good prospect over there.
Sweet Valley
11:41:38 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Which one of these is the better match?
Alpine Acres
11:39:48 Lily/Alpine
Purestables, they both are weak in Str, so not the best match in my opinion
Dash and Duchess
11:39:21 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm still so beyond ecstatic about this wk 4 🥹
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
11:38:20 Anna/Jewel
Iyiyiy lol
🤣🤣🤣
sounds weird

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
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Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcKgM.jpg

After (changing color tones):
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcrv2.jpg


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg

After:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcgV9.jpg



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
Posts: 1348
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*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
Posts: 927
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Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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