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Critiques?

October 16, 2019 08:45 PM

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I'm not done yet, but any thoughts, advice, critiques, whatever on this?

https://i.postimg.cc/xjFcGg7c/sketch1571276177472.png

Edited at October 16, 2019 08:46 PM by Ankou

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October 16, 2019 08:50 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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It looks really nice so far!

I love your muscle structuring in the shoulder.

My only critiques would be the neck ties in very high it should ideally connect right above the middle line in the breast area. And the head and neck look significantly too small for the rest of the body.

But accurate proportions will come with practice. :)

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October 16, 2019 09:01 PM

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Thanks so much for your help! I seriously think I have a HUGE problem with the head and neck compared to the body. At least now I have a new area to focus on next time I draw. :)

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