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Boulder Creek
06:13:02 
...and noticing pastures without gates, and one that has a coup fence which shouldn't be there!

oops
Boulder Creek
06:10:07 
I'm revisiting a farm layout I created a few years ago - it's 94 acres
I'm currently trying to map out the struggle of turning out horses, and more importantly which pastures are for residential horses (because I have too many to put in the barns)

I made myself a little cart and driving it around the map!
Lucky Ducky Lane
06:04:56 
I'm goofing around with COI and my highest LB horses and they are shockingly so far all under 5%
Rainview
05:50:02 Irish Capp
Okkk HEE lol -HEE Click-
Sport Pony Island
05:49:04 
Oh yeah, she's really pretty! Thanks :3
Calela Eventing
05:48:12 Cali
Half American
Rainview
05:47:24 Irish Capp
LOL trying to breed a double P Sabi... -HEE Click-
Sport Pony Island
05:45:51 
Which mare, Cali?
Calela Eventing
05:34:03 Cali
SPI
I can't get over how beautiful your featured mare is
Sport Pony Island
04:57:16 
Yall, only 70k left till i can buy a new barn!!
Dash and Duchess
03:57:33 DD | ~Squizard~
Cali, be careful lol, it's a slippery slope into a fun game of "where'd my ebs go??"
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Unfortunately I've got to poof lol! See ya later :)
Calela Eventing
03:55:50 Cali
speaking of straws, I have become addicted to buying them for no reason
I'm also addicted to using broods
Dash and Duchess
03:48:56 DD | ~Squizard~
Cali, HEE has had it's moments with me 🥲 *cough seven Sven dry spell cough* and yeah, unfortunately his straws are quite hard to come by, I was lucky enough to get mine from Sunny in exchange for some art, but I've rarely seen any sold >.> Oof!! That's awful! RF can be so mean 😭
Calela Eventing
03:46:34 Cali
DD
actually that is so sad, I am so depressed that I missed the Anakin straw. The second embryo I used was bought out of some convincing from a friend *cough cough wink wink* and it turned out awful. It was a WWE WWW match who are proven and it came out EEE and a filly
Dash and Duchess
03:43:55 DD | ~Squizard~
Cali, thank you xD that evil lil thing got the perfect name lol 😂
Dash and Duchess
03:43:14 DD | ~Squizard~
Cali, I cried 😭 the only worse match was an EEE from my AALB girl and Anakin (a now deceased top ABLB stud who's last straw went for 2 mil at auction) I will never forgive Kyvey for that one 😭
Calela Eventing
03:42:52 Cali
Loving her name DD
Calela Eventing
03:37:46 Cali
DD
Omg! Actually feel so sorry for you
Dash and Duchess
03:37:01 DD | ~Squizard~
I've got ya'll beat, 1.975 *million* dollar EEE 🥲
-HEE Click-
Calela Eventing
03:28:17 Cali
Alpine
Of course, I would 'never' blame your studs for anything.

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Boulder Creek
06:13:02 
...and noticing pastures without gates, and one that has a coup fence which shouldn't be there!

oops
Boulder Creek
06:10:07 
I'm revisiting a farm layout I created a few years ago - it's 94 acres
I'm currently trying to map out the struggle of turning out horses, and more importantly which pastures are for residential horses (because I have too many to put in the barns)

I made myself a little cart and driving it around the map!
Lucky Ducky Lane
06:04:56 
I'm goofing around with COI and my highest LB horses and they are shockingly so far all under 5%
Rainview
05:50:02 Irish Capp
Okkk HEE lol -HEE Click-
Sport Pony Island
05:49:04 
Oh yeah, she's really pretty! Thanks :3
Calela Eventing
05:48:12 Cali
Half American
Rainview
05:47:24 Irish Capp
LOL trying to breed a double P Sabi... -HEE Click-
Sport Pony Island
05:45:51 
Which mare, Cali?
Calela Eventing
05:34:03 Cali
SPI
I can't get over how beautiful your featured mare is
Sport Pony Island
04:57:16 
Yall, only 70k left till i can buy a new barn!!
Dash and Duchess
03:57:33 DD | ~Squizard~
Cali, be careful lol, it's a slippery slope into a fun game of "where'd my ebs go??"
-
Unfortunately I've got to poof lol! See ya later :)
Calela Eventing
03:55:50 Cali
speaking of straws, I have become addicted to buying them for no reason
I'm also addicted to using broods
Dash and Duchess
03:48:56 DD | ~Squizard~
Cali, HEE has had it's moments with me 🥲 *cough seven Sven dry spell cough* and yeah, unfortunately his straws are quite hard to come by, I was lucky enough to get mine from Sunny in exchange for some art, but I've rarely seen any sold >.> Oof!! That's awful! RF can be so mean 😭
Calela Eventing
03:46:34 Cali
DD
actually that is so sad, I am so depressed that I missed the Anakin straw. The second embryo I used was bought out of some convincing from a friend *cough cough wink wink* and it turned out awful. It was a WWE WWW match who are proven and it came out EEE and a filly
Dash and Duchess
03:43:55 DD | ~Squizard~
Cali, thank you xD that evil lil thing got the perfect name lol 😂
Dash and Duchess
03:43:14 DD | ~Squizard~
Cali, I cried 😭 the only worse match was an EEE from my AALB girl and Anakin (a now deceased top ABLB stud who's last straw went for 2 mil at auction) I will never forgive Kyvey for that one 😭
Calela Eventing
03:42:52 Cali
Loving her name DD
Calela Eventing
03:37:46 Cali
DD
Omg! Actually feel so sorry for you
Dash and Duchess
03:37:01 DD | ~Squizard~
I've got ya'll beat, 1.975 *million* dollar EEE 🥲
-HEE Click-
Calela Eventing
03:28:17 Cali
Alpine
Of course, I would 'never' blame your studs for anything.

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Art critique July 3, 2018 04:14 AM

Former Stable
 
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I was looking for someone opinions on my art
I currently charge 8k for a horse avatar do you think that price is right or should I change it

Example

https://i.imgur.com/KRwOGTn.jpg

I look forward to hearing your suggestions
Art critique July 3, 2018 08:58 AM


WildWillow
 
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Hi Kiralee!

Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.
That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.
However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.

For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!

I hope this helps!
WildWillow
Art critique July 6, 2018 07:17 AM

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WildWillow said:
Hi Kiralee!
Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.
For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!
I hope this helps!WildWillow














Thanks I didn’t redraw the mane/tail as I cannot at the moment Something I am working on

https://i.imgur.com/oHcNVYN.jpg

Here is another example

Edited at July 6, 2018 07:18 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 6, 2018 02:25 PM


WildWillow
 
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Hi again Kirralee!

The mane and tail on your newer piece is very good! If you are able too, on the edges of your mane I would take a blur tool or a smudge tool on a low power and go over the edges a bit. It would help make your mane and tail flow nicely.
Your horse looks a bit small compared to the background. Choosing a background that has a wider area will help your horse fit in well.
I'm unsure if you added the white markings but it looks like you did. I would go over them with a smudge tool to make it look like it is actually part of the coat rather than sitting on top.
Also, the horse's front hoof seems a bit squished. If it had to be cut that way from the stock, I would recommend either redrawing the hoof or taking parts of the other hooves to blend together to form a new one. Also, I would recommend taking a smudge tool and going over the very bottoms of the hooves so they look as though they are truly on the ground.
The last thing I would like to point out is the flower in the mane. The flower is very sharp while the horse is blurred. To fix this, you could either blur the flower or sharpen the horse.

Other than that, I can tell a huge improvement between the previous one and your most recent one!
Art critique July 7, 2018 05:02 AM

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https://i.imgur.com/Bb5U16R.jpg



My first attempt at drawing a mane and tail

Edited at July 7, 2018 06:01 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 7, 2018 06:47 AM

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Definitely better then me IÂ’ll say that right now 😂😂
Art critique July 17, 2018 06:20 AM

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https://s15.postimg.cc/m3duz3gpn/7_AD34_FA6-1_E59-40_FF-_BA15-67938431_DCF1.jpg

First line art

Edited at July 17, 2018 06:20 AM by Kirralee stud farm

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