Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


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Angels angels
07:56:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was doing quest breeding lol
Lilac Fields
07:54:19 Lillie
cool angel
Angels angels
07:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Oh wow *.*
Vancouver
07:27:05 Ana / Van
Woops, turned*
Vancouver
07:26:26 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
This one :P
Vancouver
07:25:43 Ana / Van
Min
I had a girl like that, she turnen out Average xD
DearBorn Ranch
07:12:13 Louise
that is always so sad lol
ArcticLights
07:12:03 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Or she will go all the way and be a sub
Minerva
07:10:59 Min
-HEE Click-

This pony has done 50 moves without spooking at least 3 times- watch her finally spook tomorrow and turn out Superb 🤣🤣
Hy Brasil
07:06:12 Croft
reroll on an all white sabino I like the frost in mane and tail! -HEE Click-
Embervale Acres
07:03:56 Solar Phoenix
Very nice!
Hy Brasil
06:58:05 Croft
his little brother coming up next month. They sure have badger face dialed in lol -HEE Click-
Angels angels
06:56:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ohhh I love him *-*
Hy Brasil
06:55:57 Croft
this is her dad -HEE Click-
Hy Brasil
06:55:29 Croft
guess my freshman did not do too bad :)
Red Horizon Ranch
06:52:11 Red
Ohh yeah she’s gorgeous Rivercreek
Hy Brasil
06:50:56 Croft
nice color -HEE Click-
Rivercreek Ranch
06:45:11 
-HEE Click-
She's so pretty but her rating has me devestated :((
Tamarack Mountain
06:17:25 Opal
get good show geldings, breed very little only your best quality pairings
South Rock Valley
05:30:59 
hi! I'm a returning player with no memory if this game... if you have any tips for starting out or breeding my mail is open!!

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Angels angels
07:56:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was doing quest breeding lol
Lilac Fields
07:54:19 Lillie
cool angel
Angels angels
07:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Oh wow *.*
Vancouver
07:27:05 Ana / Van
Woops, turned*
Vancouver
07:26:26 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
This one :P
Vancouver
07:25:43 Ana / Van
Min
I had a girl like that, she turnen out Average xD
DearBorn Ranch
07:12:13 Louise
that is always so sad lol
ArcticLights
07:12:03 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Or she will go all the way and be a sub
Minerva
07:10:59 Min
-HEE Click-

This pony has done 50 moves without spooking at least 3 times- watch her finally spook tomorrow and turn out Superb 🤣🤣
Hy Brasil
07:06:12 Croft
reroll on an all white sabino I like the frost in mane and tail! -HEE Click-
Embervale Acres
07:03:56 Solar Phoenix
Very nice!
Hy Brasil
06:58:05 Croft
his little brother coming up next month. They sure have badger face dialed in lol -HEE Click-
Angels angels
06:56:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ohhh I love him *-*
Hy Brasil
06:55:57 Croft
this is her dad -HEE Click-
Hy Brasil
06:55:29 Croft
guess my freshman did not do too bad :)
Red Horizon Ranch
06:52:11 Red
Ohh yeah she’s gorgeous Rivercreek
Hy Brasil
06:50:56 Croft
nice color -HEE Click-
Rivercreek Ranch
06:45:11 
-HEE Click-
She's so pretty but her rating has me devestated :((
Tamarack Mountain
06:17:25 Opal
get good show geldings, breed very little only your best quality pairings
South Rock Valley
05:30:59 
hi! I'm a returning player with no memory if this game... if you have any tips for starting out or breeding my mail is open!!

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than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:24 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zt8M.jpg

I've been working on an updated art style for about two weeks now and I'd love some critiques on my first stage of progress with this. Please no negativity, I'd just love some suggestions and critique on this piece so I can improve :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:29 AM


Flipperruby30
 
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It looks amazing!!Try perhaps editing the top of the landscape behind but other wise Well Done!
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:47 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:53 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)



Thank you! This helps a lot.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:45 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:49 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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VellaDun Manor said:
Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)



Thank you! I've been thinking about trying to paint manes but they never come out how I'd like, no matter how many tutorials I look at xD I'll try that though as well as the lighting. There is a vignette on there, it's light though.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:53 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Mhmm, haha =)

I actually have struggled sooo much with hair, lol, and all the DA tutorials made it look super easy and then mine came out as crap xD So I honestly just played around myself until I finally found something that looked decent and had some potential if I refined the style a bit and such... but yea, feel free to PM me if you need any help with stuff like pesky hair x)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:56 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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I will :P I've got a tablet, but my stupid hand doesn't like drawing xD
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:06 PM

Former Stable
 
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It looks wonderful but the glow around the horse could be slightly less intense and the horse seems a little too smudged but I love it! Looks amazing
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:08 PM


Casanova
 
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It looks great! Only thing I would look into is manes (As mentioned above) But I love the strong glow around the horse! It's personally a style I really like.

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