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Southmoon
02:58:59 Nori
Anybody else named some of their captures based on markings?
-HEE Click- C-name bc she has C on her forehead
-HEE Click- Has the letters "IDA" on her neck
Minerva
02:43:09 Min
I love when dogs put themselves in weird positions to snuggle. Norm's currently upside down laid behind my back with his head on my head and he's having a dream 🤣🤣
Tobiano Lady
02:33:03 Tobi 👻
no problem Willow <3
God is Mighty Stable
02:32:24 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Thank you Tobi
Two Trees Stables
02:31:21 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Yes, 🙂
Tobiano Lady
02:31:01 Tobi 👻
on God is Mighty?
Two Trees Stables
02:29:56 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Regular
Tobiano Lady
02:24:23 Tobi 👻
super or regular Willow?
God is Mighty Stable
02:21:20 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Does anyone have detergent?
Two Trees Stables
02:20:48 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Yay, my girl made it to the home page!
It's such a nice day
Tobiano Lady
02:09:24 Tobi 👻
-HEE Click-
<333
Lunalovegood
01:45:08 Loony/Loony Tune
DD I’ll PM you. But if you can’t help then don’t worry ::
Lunalovegood
01:44:41 Loony/Loony Tune
Okay KPH, thanks :)
Dash and Duchess
01:44:16 DD | ~Squizard~
See ya KPH! (here come the brow dogs xD)
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loony, i could help depending on what it is <3
KPH Equestrian
01:43:39 Rapcoon | Jester
good night!<3
KPH Equestrian
01:43:32 Rapcoon | Jester
looney
feel free to PM me! I'll respond in the morning<3
Lunalovegood
01:43:20 Loony/Loony Tune
Bye KPH :)
KPH Equestrian
01:43:03 Rapcoon | Jester
DD
yes get some! xD
I gotta go, the hour grows late, good night!<3
Lunalovegood
01:41:28 Loony/Loony Tune
Guys can someone with good knowledge in art please help me with a project of mine? Thanks
Dash and Duchess
01:41:12 DD | ~Squizard~
KPH, Ooo I need to get some xD and I totally agree on the all dogs need eyebrows front 🤣

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Southmoon
02:58:59 Nori
Anybody else named some of their captures based on markings?
-HEE Click- C-name bc she has C on her forehead
-HEE Click- Has the letters "IDA" on her neck
Minerva
02:43:09 Min
I love when dogs put themselves in weird positions to snuggle. Norm's currently upside down laid behind my back with his head on my head and he's having a dream 🤣🤣
Tobiano Lady
02:33:03 Tobi 👻
no problem Willow <3
God is Mighty Stable
02:32:24 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Thank you Tobi
Two Trees Stables
02:31:21 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Yes, 🙂
Tobiano Lady
02:31:01 Tobi 👻
on God is Mighty?
Two Trees Stables
02:29:56 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Regular
Tobiano Lady
02:24:23 Tobi 👻
super or regular Willow?
God is Mighty Stable
02:21:20 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Does anyone have detergent?
Two Trees Stables
02:20:48 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Yay, my girl made it to the home page!
It's such a nice day
Tobiano Lady
02:09:24 Tobi 👻
-HEE Click-
<333
Lunalovegood
01:45:08 Loony/Loony Tune
DD I’ll PM you. But if you can’t help then don’t worry ::
Lunalovegood
01:44:41 Loony/Loony Tune
Okay KPH, thanks :)
Dash and Duchess
01:44:16 DD | ~Squizard~
See ya KPH! (here come the brow dogs xD)
-
loony, i could help depending on what it is <3
KPH Equestrian
01:43:39 Rapcoon | Jester
good night!<3
KPH Equestrian
01:43:32 Rapcoon | Jester
looney
feel free to PM me! I'll respond in the morning<3
Lunalovegood
01:43:20 Loony/Loony Tune
Bye KPH :)
KPH Equestrian
01:43:03 Rapcoon | Jester
DD
yes get some! xD
I gotta go, the hour grows late, good night!<3
Lunalovegood
01:41:28 Loony/Loony Tune
Guys can someone with good knowledge in art please help me with a project of mine? Thanks
Dash and Duchess
01:41:12 DD | ~Squizard~
KPH, Ooo I need to get some xD and I totally agree on the all dogs need eyebrows front 🤣

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Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:24 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zt8M.jpg

I've been working on an updated art style for about two weeks now and I'd love some critiques on my first stage of progress with this. Please no negativity, I'd just love some suggestions and critique on this piece so I can improve :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:29 AM


Flipperruby30
 
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It looks amazing!!Try perhaps editing the top of the landscape behind but other wise Well Done!
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:47 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:53 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)



Thank you! This helps a lot.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:45 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:49 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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VellaDun Manor said:
Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)



Thank you! I've been thinking about trying to paint manes but they never come out how I'd like, no matter how many tutorials I look at xD I'll try that though as well as the lighting. There is a vignette on there, it's light though.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:53 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Mhmm, haha =)

I actually have struggled sooo much with hair, lol, and all the DA tutorials made it look super easy and then mine came out as crap xD So I honestly just played around myself until I finally found something that looked decent and had some potential if I refined the style a bit and such... but yea, feel free to PM me if you need any help with stuff like pesky hair x)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:56 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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I will :P I've got a tablet, but my stupid hand doesn't like drawing xD
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:06 PM

Former Stable
 
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It looks wonderful but the glow around the horse could be slightly less intense and the horse seems a little too smudged but I love it! Looks amazing
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:08 PM


Casanova
 
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It looks great! Only thing I would look into is manes (As mentioned above) But I love the strong glow around the horse! It's personally a style I really like.

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