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Looking for a one or three month upgrade!
Nightingales Ridge
09:12:03 Issy
Yay thank you
Alpine Acres
09:10:54 Lily
Issy
one up in my shop :)
Nightingales Ridge
09:09:09 Issy
Anyone have detergent I can buy?
Glacier Bay Cove
09:07:54 Arctic Katz
Selling the Sherpa map, so I can breed approve some more of my horses. I don't know if anyone wants/needs a Sherpa map
Chase's Place
09:01:32 :)Chase
Horses for breeding
-HEE Click-

Shop - new things added constantly
-HEE Click-

ISO
-HEE Click-
Peacock Estate
08:57:24 Lily
Restocked shop with low store prices, including a yellow stained glass horse (strength) for 80k
-HEE Click-
Horse Haven Stables
08:49:02 HHS⎹ Lyla
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EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)
Barbury Estates
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ISO an upgrade!!! I have ebs ready to go!
Darkwood
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Critiques? November 21, 2017 11:01 PM


Casanova
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

Former Stable
 
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OMG!! Love It!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM


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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!




Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!


Thanks <3
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

Former Stable
 
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how do you make art?
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:38 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:53 PM


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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)


I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:23 PM


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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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