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Wisteria Run Farm
01:13:27 Solar/Ria
Have you tried riding while someone else leads him beside her on foot?
Pentagram Stables
01:13:02 Penta - KNNs
Perhaps lunging him for an hour or so, would take some of the piss n vinegar out of him ?
Minerva
01:07:51 Min
He's very anti-being-beside-her xD They can be led together fine, and I did ride and lead them down the lane a few weeks ago with only semi drama but apparently practicing in a safe environment is a no-go xD On the plus side, he's had some experience of being loose in the field while she's being ridden now I suppose
Pentagram Stables
01:04:53 Penta - KNNs
That explains why Ted has his face in her Bum
Minerva
01:04:06 Min
Ted is 2 for clarification, so he definitely isn't the ridden pony xD
Minerva
01:02:54 Min
Penta I wish I had enough ponies to pick and choose xD Minnie is better as the led one but she's been led off as well. She can be impatient though which doesn't help
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:59:50 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Now i understand why selling good horses does miracles lol
Pentagram Stables
12:58:47 Penta - KNNs
Min - maybe try using a different lead pony ?
Blue Diamond
12:57:23 Bluey
When you put all of your rumble winnings into savings so now you have over 500k saved up over two months lol
Minerva
12:54:20 Min
Tried to practise ride and lead with the ponies today- I give it a 0/10 xD Ted refuses to walk beside Minnie and just plants unless he can have his head right in her bum. Any tips appreciated because there's only so far I'm willing to walk to exercise him lol
emeritus
12:49:19 
Ohhh much time to save free captures.. I have been spending them all
Snitches' Stitches
12:47:59 Snitch
I know it's the beginning of August, but I really can't wait for October
Fantasy Horses
12:45:57 Fantasy | Fanta
Emeritus
I think it's some time in October :)
Fantasy Horses
12:45:38 Fantasy | Fanta
Canter
Good RO for you, huh? :P
I got the WWW and 3 EEEs >_< Plus some WC SD foals, but I was just testing a freshie.
emeritus
12:45:27 
Oh! When is the next?
Canterwood Acres
12:44:24 Canter
-HEE Click-
and her
Canterwood Acres
12:43:52 Canter
-HEE Click-
Fantasy Horses
12:43:47 Fantasy | Fanta
Emeritus
It's a day when captures are cheaper and the chance to get better rated horses is increased. It happens about every 3 months.
Canterwood Acres
12:43:42 Canter
then there is -HEE Click-
he was a complete surprise lol
emeritus
12:42:31 
What is "capture day"?

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Wisteria Run Farm
01:13:27 Solar/Ria
Have you tried riding while someone else leads him beside her on foot?
Pentagram Stables
01:13:02 Penta - KNNs
Perhaps lunging him for an hour or so, would take some of the piss n vinegar out of him ?
Minerva
01:07:51 Min
He's very anti-being-beside-her xD They can be led together fine, and I did ride and lead them down the lane a few weeks ago with only semi drama but apparently practicing in a safe environment is a no-go xD On the plus side, he's had some experience of being loose in the field while she's being ridden now I suppose
Pentagram Stables
01:04:53 Penta - KNNs
That explains why Ted has his face in her Bum
Minerva
01:04:06 Min
Ted is 2 for clarification, so he definitely isn't the ridden pony xD
Minerva
01:02:54 Min
Penta I wish I had enough ponies to pick and choose xD Minnie is better as the led one but she's been led off as well. She can be impatient though which doesn't help
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:59:50 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Now i understand why selling good horses does miracles lol
Pentagram Stables
12:58:47 Penta - KNNs
Min - maybe try using a different lead pony ?
Blue Diamond
12:57:23 Bluey
When you put all of your rumble winnings into savings so now you have over 500k saved up over two months lol
Minerva
12:54:20 Min
Tried to practise ride and lead with the ponies today- I give it a 0/10 xD Ted refuses to walk beside Minnie and just plants unless he can have his head right in her bum. Any tips appreciated because there's only so far I'm willing to walk to exercise him lol
emeritus
12:49:19 
Ohhh much time to save free captures.. I have been spending them all
Snitches' Stitches
12:47:59 Snitch
I know it's the beginning of August, but I really can't wait for October
Fantasy Horses
12:45:57 Fantasy | Fanta
Emeritus
I think it's some time in October :)
Fantasy Horses
12:45:38 Fantasy | Fanta
Canter
Good RO for you, huh? :P
I got the WWW and 3 EEEs >_< Plus some WC SD foals, but I was just testing a freshie.
emeritus
12:45:27 
Oh! When is the next?
Canterwood Acres
12:44:24 Canter
-HEE Click-
and her
Canterwood Acres
12:43:52 Canter
-HEE Click-
Fantasy Horses
12:43:47 Fantasy | Fanta
Emeritus
It's a day when captures are cheaper and the chance to get better rated horses is increased. It happens about every 3 months.
Canterwood Acres
12:43:42 Canter
then there is -HEE Click-
he was a complete surprise lol
emeritus
12:42:31 
What is "capture day"?

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Art critique July 3, 2018 04:14 AM

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I was looking for someone opinions on my art
I currently charge 8k for a horse avatar do you think that price is right or should I change it

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https://i.imgur.com/KRwOGTn.jpg

I look forward to hearing your suggestions
Art critique July 3, 2018 08:58 AM


WildWillow
 
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Hi Kiralee!

Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.
That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.
However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.

For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!

I hope this helps!
WildWillow
Art critique July 6, 2018 07:17 AM

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WildWillow said:
Hi Kiralee!
Personally, I would cut out the horse a bit neater. There seems to be a few sharp edges on the back and belly. This can be fixed by taking your time while cutting out the horse and smoothing out any rough edges with the eraser tool. Also in the areas where you are having a yellow/orange lighting on the horse (feathers on legs, mane and tail), I would give a purple hue to make it seem like the horse is actually in the background. Also where the legs meet the grass, taking a smudging tool on a low power and smudging the bottoms of the legs would make it look like they naturally transition into the grass. Also on the mane and tail, I would take a purplish black color and redraw the mane and tail. It looks as though you only cut out the mane and tail and didn't redraw any of it.That being said, I really like how you gave the body of the horse a purple hue! And I also really like how the photo and horse are lighted.However, if your light is coming from behind the horse, the horse should have a shadow underneath and in front of it.
For now, I would stick with your pricing. As you improve, you should certainly raise your prices!
I hope this helps!WildWillow














Thanks I didn’t redraw the mane/tail as I cannot at the moment Something I am working on

https://i.imgur.com/oHcNVYN.jpg

Here is another example

Edited at July 6, 2018 07:18 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 6, 2018 02:25 PM


WildWillow
 
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Hi again Kirralee!

The mane and tail on your newer piece is very good! If you are able too, on the edges of your mane I would take a blur tool or a smudge tool on a low power and go over the edges a bit. It would help make your mane and tail flow nicely.
Your horse looks a bit small compared to the background. Choosing a background that has a wider area will help your horse fit in well.
I'm unsure if you added the white markings but it looks like you did. I would go over them with a smudge tool to make it look like it is actually part of the coat rather than sitting on top.
Also, the horse's front hoof seems a bit squished. If it had to be cut that way from the stock, I would recommend either redrawing the hoof or taking parts of the other hooves to blend together to form a new one. Also, I would recommend taking a smudge tool and going over the very bottoms of the hooves so they look as though they are truly on the ground.
The last thing I would like to point out is the flower in the mane. The flower is very sharp while the horse is blurred. To fix this, you could either blur the flower or sharpen the horse.

Other than that, I can tell a huge improvement between the previous one and your most recent one!
Art critique July 7, 2018 05:02 AM

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https://i.imgur.com/Bb5U16R.jpg



My first attempt at drawing a mane and tail

Edited at July 7, 2018 06:01 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art critique July 7, 2018 06:47 AM

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Definitely better then me I’ll say that right now 😂😂
Art critique July 17, 2018 06:20 AM

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https://s15.postimg.cc/m3duz3gpn/7_AD34_FA6-1_E59-40_FF-_BA15-67938431_DCF1.jpg

First line art

Edited at July 17, 2018 06:20 AM by Kirralee stud farm

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