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Horse Eden Eventing Game

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12:08:34 Gemstone

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This little baby is such a adorable thing

Dash and Duchess

12:08:04 DD | ~Squizard~

Diva, thank you!! Somehow it's the second time my first WWW on an account has come from a random W combo mare on a yolo match 🤣

Mooncloud Magic

12:07:23 🧸 Diva

Will do Eve, thanks

Mooncloud Magic

12:07:03 🧸 Diva

That's awesome and with a wee gal, you got some powerful RF

12:06:54 evebot

Diva please put that in the bug forum so it gets on my radar.

12:06:14 Gemstone

I think I’m actually dumb. When I was putting a horse up for private sale I put the stable number as the price 😂😂

Dash and Duchess

12:06:08 DD | ~Squizard~

Thorn, thank you!! My soul almost left my body when I rated her XD

Thornwood Manor

12:04:55

DD she's stunning!

Mooncloud Magic

12:04:15 🧸 Diva

Why does club discounts for breeding do not apply when creating embryo via lc ? Like it should

Dash and Duchess

12:03:05 DD | ~Squizard~

I still can't believe her 😭 my first WWW KNN on a random Friday xD
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12:01:35 Gemstone

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Ok this was a good snag!

11:57:17

I know!
I'm so excited with all that's been out so far.
Halloween will be outrageous this year!

11:56:19 evebot

Your PPP will have a blast with all the upcoming costumes.

11:55:57

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Yeah thats sad that the brindle will never show

11:55:54

RIDs never looking better!

11:54:21 Gemstone

I know

Elegant Equines

11:54:07 Appie Breeder

Gemstone the first one is beautiful. And the other one is a little sad because you will never see the brindle lol.

11:53:51 evebot

It's the Reaper.

Elks

11:53:04 Elky

Love the skull, Eve!

11:52:11 Gemstone

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These are my only Brindles

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12:08:34 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
This little baby is such a adorable thing

Dash and Duchess

12:08:04 DD | ~Squizard~

Diva, thank you!! Somehow it's the second time my first WWW on an account has come from a random W combo mare on a yolo match 🤣

Mooncloud Magic

12:07:23 🧸 Diva

Will do Eve, thanks

Mooncloud Magic

12:07:03 🧸 Diva

That's awesome and with a wee gal, you got some powerful RF

12:06:54 evebot

Diva please put that in the bug forum so it gets on my radar.

12:06:14 Gemstone

I think I’m actually dumb. When I was putting a horse up for private sale I put the stable number as the price 😂😂

Dash and Duchess

12:06:08 DD | ~Squizard~

Thorn, thank you!! My soul almost left my body when I rated her XD

Thornwood Manor

12:04:55

DD she's stunning!

Mooncloud Magic

12:04:15 🧸 Diva

Why does club discounts for breeding do not apply when creating embryo via lc ? Like it should

Dash and Duchess

12:03:05 DD | ~Squizard~

I still can't believe her 😭 my first WWW KNN on a random Friday xD
-HEE Click-

12:01:35 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
Ok this was a good snag!

11:57:17

I know!
I'm so excited with all that's been out so far.
Halloween will be outrageous this year!

11:56:19 evebot

Your PPP will have a blast with all the upcoming costumes.

11:55:57

-HEE Click-
Yeah thats sad that the brindle will never show

11:55:54

RIDs never looking better!

11:54:21 Gemstone

I know

Elegant Equines

11:54:07 Appie Breeder

Gemstone the first one is beautiful. And the other one is a little sad because you will never see the brindle lol.

11:53:51 evebot

It's the Reaper.

Elks

11:53:04 Elky

Love the skull, Eve!

11:52:11 Gemstone

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These are my only Brindles

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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