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Caramel

07:59:04 Keijo Or Lake

FHF Belango and CZ Ignite are in ALLL of my horses pedigrees and im just trying to find one without them T-T

MakeEm Fancy

07:58:46 Ally 💜

Im actually on the hunt for a dachshund for my mom <3 They are all so cute lol @Walker

Sleepwalker Centre

07:58:04 Walker

Ally,
haha!! They certainly have character

MakeEm Fancy

07:57:17 Ally 💜

I have a chiweenie and he is definitely something else 🤣 @Walker

The Joker

07:56:22 Ari <3

Thats awesome! Food motivation is super handy

Hi DD! How are you?

Dash and Duchess

07:54:46 DD | ~Squizard~

Ari!!

The Old Gods

07:54:10 Void Malign

I will say that I appreciate that I can do almost anything with her while she eats. Even gone so far as to give her a bit of a bath

Sleepwalker Centre

07:52:45 Walker

lol I can certainly agree with that (side-eyes my stubborn and too-smart-for-his-own-good dachshund)

The Joker

07:52:04 Ari <3

Bahaha, a lot of personality doesn't necessarily go hand in hand with easy 😂

The Old Gods

07:51:22 Void Malign

she's a handful lol

The Joker

07:48:51 Ari <3

Nice! I've heard they have really great personalities

The Old Gods

07:47:33 Void Malign

yup, she is

The Joker

07:43:43 Ari <3

She's lovely! We had silver dapple ponies years ago, I love the colour so much. Is she a rocky mountain horse?

Sunni

07:42:15 Sunni bunny

Doing risky business here haha, I got a while foal tho.

Wolf Dancer

07:41:12 Wolf Burger (Leg)

But your pretty😭 Why couldn't you rate well -HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

07:37:06 Arctic Katz

I currently have a bravery quest, a capture quest and a show quest

The Old Gods

07:37:02 Void Malign

She's just heavily sunbleached at the moment

The Old Gods

07:36:49 Void Malign

But yeah. Ari got it: silver dapple

Sunni

07:33:54 Sunni bunny

I am getting a lot of breeding quest's, not gonna lie 3 white today.
Gonna have a lot of maps for the capture party.

Sleepwalker Centre

07:33:27 Walker

-HEE Click- not sure if I've shown this girl off at all, so happy with her

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Caramel

07:59:04 Keijo Or Lake

FHF Belango and CZ Ignite are in ALLL of my horses pedigrees and im just trying to find one without them T-T

MakeEm Fancy

07:58:46 Ally 💜

Im actually on the hunt for a dachshund for my mom <3 They are all so cute lol @Walker

Sleepwalker Centre

07:58:04 Walker

Ally,
haha!! They certainly have character

MakeEm Fancy

07:57:17 Ally 💜

I have a chiweenie and he is definitely something else 🤣 @Walker

The Joker

07:56:22 Ari <3

Thats awesome! Food motivation is super handy

Hi DD! How are you?

Dash and Duchess

07:54:46 DD | ~Squizard~

Ari!!

The Old Gods

07:54:10 Void Malign

I will say that I appreciate that I can do almost anything with her while she eats. Even gone so far as to give her a bit of a bath

Sleepwalker Centre

07:52:45 Walker

lol I can certainly agree with that (side-eyes my stubborn and too-smart-for-his-own-good dachshund)

The Joker

07:52:04 Ari <3

Bahaha, a lot of personality doesn't necessarily go hand in hand with easy 😂

The Old Gods

07:51:22 Void Malign

she's a handful lol

The Joker

07:48:51 Ari <3

Nice! I've heard they have really great personalities

The Old Gods

07:47:33 Void Malign

yup, she is

The Joker

07:43:43 Ari <3

She's lovely! We had silver dapple ponies years ago, I love the colour so much. Is she a rocky mountain horse?

Sunni

07:42:15 Sunni bunny

Doing risky business here haha, I got a while foal tho.

Wolf Dancer

07:41:12 Wolf Burger (Leg)

But your pretty😭 Why couldn't you rate well -HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

07:37:06 Arctic Katz

I currently have a bravery quest, a capture quest and a show quest

The Old Gods

07:37:02 Void Malign

She's just heavily sunbleached at the moment

The Old Gods

07:36:49 Void Malign

But yeah. Ari got it: silver dapple

Sunni

07:33:54 Sunni bunny

I am getting a lot of breeding quest's, not gonna lie 3 white today.
Gonna have a lot of maps for the capture party.

Sleepwalker Centre

07:33:27 Walker

-HEE Click- not sure if I've shown this girl off at all, so happy with her

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critique please

September 18, 2018 06:50 PM

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http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

looking for critique on this piece

I use gimp

improved version :

http://oi65.tinypic.com/1zzgvtd.jpg

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:12 PM by Scarlett Breeze Farm

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September 20, 2018 11:45 AM

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still looking :)

critique please

September 23, 2018 09:58 AM

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I thought this piece was SUPER cute!

If anything it's a little bit bright where you have the light flare since it's on a light coated horse. Even though it's a tad bright, you did excellent on matching the lighting to the horse.

I think the horses eyes could have a bit more detail, and the forelock with more stray strands of hair.

Beautiful piece!

critique please

September 23, 2018 01:10 PM

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i made a better version, fetching link now :)

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September 23, 2018 01:25 PM

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I love them both, but I'm not a fan on the sparkly, glowing, floating balls xP

On the second one, I'd lower the brightness and contrast on the horse just a tad. The mane looks very good, love the fly away hairs however the forelock looks spiked almost. I'd bring the hairs downwards more and give them slightly more movement. The back foot looks like it cuts away to suddenly as well. Other than that, fantastic work!!! :D

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:26 PM by Trinity Equine

critique please

September 23, 2018 02:34 PM

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