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WWE SH Stallion for sale! 6 years old, Silver brown dun. 150k or PM me offers!
Nightingales Ridge
09:00:14 Issy
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PEE filly $500
Boulder Creek
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Skyrim
08:30:24 Wynter/Ghostly
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WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 250k. Multiple EEE and EWE producer.
Dreamtime Farm
08:09:16 Dreamtime
Army auction ends at noon today! All rated, level 3 and up.
Breeding stock for sale in sale barn. All rated, some fun colors, AA SH PON KNN.
Twilight Forest
07:40:47 Robin
E+ Rated Color Studs
EWE+ Eventing Studs
W Color/SD Studs
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Most studs are gene tested.
All studs are discounted for CQE Club members!
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TF Weekend Auction!
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-Elite Single Discipline Fillies and Colts
-Elite Braves
-Color Stock
-EEE PON Colt
-Great gelding and SD breeding prospects!
-Ends 3 PM HEE Time
Chantilly Royale KNN
07:27:19 
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Horse Glider
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ISO 3 month upgrade ebs ready!
Cody Creek
09:06:41 Chey
-HEE Click-
Horse Haven Stables
09:05:43 HHS⎹ Lyla
-HEE Click-

WWE SH Stallion for sale! 6 years old, Silver brown dun. 150k or PM me offers!
Nightingales Ridge
09:00:14 Issy
-HEE Click-
PEE filly $500
Boulder Creek
08:53:47 
Pretty Pony Pageant
August Show:

- Cross Country
- Matchy Matchy
- Working Equitation *
- Get Spotted
~ Flower Festival
~ Beach Ride

Everyone is welcome to join!
Free to Enter!
Win EBs!

-HEE Click-
Angels angels
08:41:56 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
EEE-WWW Auction ends today!
Skyrim
08:30:24 Wynter/Ghostly
-HEE Click-
WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 250k. Multiple EEE and EWE producer.
Dreamtime Farm
08:09:16 Dreamtime
Army auction ends at noon today! All rated, level 3 and up.
Breeding stock for sale in sale barn. All rated, some fun colors, AA SH PON KNN.
Twilight Forest
07:40:47 Robin
E+ Rated Color Studs
EWE+ Eventing Studs
W Color/SD Studs
~~~
Most studs are gene tested.
All studs are discounted for CQE Club members!
--------------------------
TF Weekend Auction!
-HEE Click-
-Elite Single Discipline Fillies and Colts
-Elite Braves
-Color Stock
-EEE PON Colt
-Great gelding and SD breeding prospects!
-Ends 3 PM HEE Time
Chantilly Royale KNN
07:27:19 
-HEE Click-
Cheapest stuff in store!

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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