Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Nolified
12:21:43 noli,SH thief,bread
And you shall be gelded

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Emmas Eventers
12:19:59 
I'm only on 104 days, not by choice but internet went down late on a Saturday so didn't get fixed til the Monday
pandemoniu_m
12:19:31 pheezy
okay boulder!
Boulder Creek
12:11:52 
Pheezy - add that idea to this suggestion
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Bioshock Manor
12:08:50 Storm
1337 days logged in. I need a more adventure filled life 😂
Bioshock Manor
12:07:54 Storm
Right 😭
MakeEm Fancy
12:07:33 Ally 💜
1961 days logged in :D
pandemoniu_m
12:04:55 pheezy
i wish we could trade quest items into the store for things of equal value. i got a cc medallion but i need a jumping one 😭
Bioshock Manor
12:01:56 Storm
Honestly should be able to give away questions items. St least donate to the falls. I can't stand having all this useless stuff
Lucky Ranch
11:53:40 luhckeigh
Me and derby hats are so locked in thsts my true huzz
Neverfade Manor
11:51:26 Storm
It's easier than it used to be
Skyward Stud
11:45:16 Skrangle
I love the derby hats game. it's funding my entire account at this point lol
CWY country
11:28:31 C
Roan, you're welcome :)
RealTree EQ.
11:25:00 Roan🦋⃤
thank youu!
CWY country
11:24:46 C
Roan, she's super pretty.
RealTree EQ.
11:24:44 Roan🦋⃤
Palomino,

I do as well, shes beautiful!
Palomino Meadow
11:24:08 
Love her color, Tree!
RealTree EQ.
11:23:22 Roan🦋⃤
look at this baby, so happy with her!
-HEE Click-
Palomino Meadow
11:21:02 
Thank you guys!!
Boulder Creek
11:20:25 
@Palomino Meadow
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Nolified
12:21:43 noli,SH thief,bread
And you shall be gelded

-HEE Click-
Emmas Eventers
12:19:59 
I'm only on 104 days, not by choice but internet went down late on a Saturday so didn't get fixed til the Monday
pandemoniu_m
12:19:31 pheezy
okay boulder!
Boulder Creek
12:11:52 
Pheezy - add that idea to this suggestion
-HEE Click-
Bioshock Manor
12:08:50 Storm
1337 days logged in. I need a more adventure filled life 😂
Bioshock Manor
12:07:54 Storm
Right 😭
MakeEm Fancy
12:07:33 Ally 💜
1961 days logged in :D
pandemoniu_m
12:04:55 pheezy
i wish we could trade quest items into the store for things of equal value. i got a cc medallion but i need a jumping one 😭
Bioshock Manor
12:01:56 Storm
Honestly should be able to give away questions items. St least donate to the falls. I can't stand having all this useless stuff
Lucky Ranch
11:53:40 luhckeigh
Me and derby hats are so locked in thsts my true huzz
Neverfade Manor
11:51:26 Storm
It's easier than it used to be
Skyward Stud
11:45:16 Skrangle
I love the derby hats game. it's funding my entire account at this point lol
CWY country
11:28:31 C
Roan, you're welcome :)
RealTree EQ.
11:25:00 Roan🦋⃤
thank youu!
CWY country
11:24:46 C
Roan, she's super pretty.
RealTree EQ.
11:24:44 Roan🦋⃤
Palomino,

I do as well, shes beautiful!
Palomino Meadow
11:24:08 
Love her color, Tree!
RealTree EQ.
11:23:22 Roan🦋⃤
look at this baby, so happy with her!
-HEE Click-
Palomino Meadow
11:21:02 
Thank you guys!!
Boulder Creek
11:20:25 
@Palomino Meadow
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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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