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Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it

Winter Curtain

11:35:00 Win | Water

How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?

11:32:43 AZ

-HEE Click- new chimera <3

Dash and Duchess

11:32:06 DD | ~Squizard~

I'm honestly debating whether to give her favorite child featured privileges 🤔
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11:30:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

you should

Halloween stable

11:29:26

Does everyone wanna look at my featured horse he is very pretty I think I wanna keep him

11:28:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

:'(

11:28:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I remember I made this awesome piece which was a white horse (good) with birds and tentacles reaching out and charging at this black horse with ravens and the tentacles (evil apparently) on a bridge with a waterfall in the background and I totally regret it

Dash and Duchess

11:25:40 DD | ~Squizard~

Peggy, yup I feel that 🥲

Dash and Duchess

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Oop I poofed earlier 😭

Winter Curtain

11:25:00 Win | Water

I have 34k more to breed, and try to get a brindle.

Pegasus Lane

11:24:05 Peggy (or) Peg

I also have an art piece I regret selling 🥲 You live and learn I guess

Halloween stable

11:14:40

OMG I forgot I had these on my stable

11:10:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

not bad for a quick 30 min piece after three months :)
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Well your not champagne but you are pretty O.o
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Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.

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He's so pretty Win

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Look at this guy -HEE Click-

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11:37:44 AZ

Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it

Winter Curtain

11:35:00 Win | Water

How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?

11:32:43 AZ

-HEE Click- new chimera <3

Dash and Duchess

11:32:06 DD | ~Squizard~

I'm honestly debating whether to give her favorite child featured privileges 🤔
-HEE Click-

11:30:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

you should

Halloween stable

11:29:26

Does everyone wanna look at my featured horse he is very pretty I think I wanna keep him

11:28:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

:'(

11:28:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

Dash and Duchess

11:25:40 DD | ~Squizard~

Peggy, yup I feel that 🥲

Dash and Duchess

11:25:23 DD | ~Squizard~

Oop I poofed earlier 😭

Winter Curtain

11:25:00 Win | Water

I have 34k more to breed, and try to get a brindle.

Pegasus Lane

11:24:05 Peggy (or) Peg

I also have an art piece I regret selling 🥲 You live and learn I guess

Halloween stable

11:14:40

OMG I forgot I had these on my stable

11:10:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

not bad for a quick 30 min piece after three months :)
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September 18, 2018 06:50 PM

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http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

looking for critique on this piece

I use gimp

improved version :

http://oi65.tinypic.com/1zzgvtd.jpg

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:12 PM by Scarlett Breeze Farm

September 20, 2018 11:45 AM

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still looking :)

September 23, 2018 09:58 AM

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I thought this piece was SUPER cute!

If anything it's a little bit bright where you have the light flare since it's on a light coated horse. Even though it's a tad bright, you did excellent on matching the lighting to the horse.

I think the horses eyes could have a bit more detail, and the forelock with more stray strands of hair.

Beautiful piece!

September 23, 2018 01:10 PM

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i made a better version, fetching link now :)

September 23, 2018 01:25 PM

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I love them both, but I'm not a fan on the sparkly, glowing, floating balls xP

On the second one, I'd lower the brightness and contrast on the horse just a tad. The mane looks very good, love the fly away hairs however the forelock looks spiked almost. I'd bring the hairs downwards more and give them slightly more movement. The back foot looks like it cuts away to suddenly as well. Other than that, fantastic work!!! :D

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:26 PM by Trinity Equine

September 23, 2018 02:34 PM