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Sunni
11:32:27 Sunni bunny
She got very very lucky, she was sleeping on the back deck, and it didn't fall any lower.
The back deck is stable but damaged and the roof on the deck is damaged but the roof to the house looks good
She warned the property own the tree was dead and gonna fall.
They didn't listen and the city said they couldn't do anything.
Crestwood Eq.
11:30:53 Ivy / poison ivy
i have 81k in my RO savings. now to save another 1 mil or so in the next week. easy peasy. /jokingggg
Calela Eventing
11:30:47 Cali
Sunni
Oh! Is she alright?
Sunni
11:30:09 Sunni bunny
Am back haha, sorry.
I'll be popping on and off, I tree fell on my aunt's house so we are trying to help her.
Milo Ridge
11:28:46 Milo | KNN Breeder
Sorry, meant to be from Cali lol
Milo Ridge
11:28:29 Milo | KNN Breeder
I just finished up an auction and a big art sale so I can afford some more but most of the glasses I need I have already bought
Alpine Acres
11:28:26 Lily/Alpine
Almost saved all I'm going to need for RO :)
Alpine Acres
11:28:08 Lily/Alpine
Ivy, it really works!
Crestwood Eq.
11:27:56 Ivy / poison ivy
Lily

i should do that.....
Alpine Acres
11:27:37 Lily/Alpine
Ivy, I put all my money is dedicated savings accounts so I don't spend it all xD
Crestwood Eq.
11:27:02 Ivy / poison ivy
i need yall's pay grade xD
Crestwood Eq.
11:26:47 Ivy / poison ivy
Cali

i wish. im broke in store creds and dont have enough ebs to buy enough creds
Alpine Acres
11:25:43 Lily/Alpine
just snagged a Mv glass
Calela Eventing
11:25:37 Cali
Ivy
I know! We're all buying them!!
Crestwood Eq.
11:24:27 Ivy / poison ivy
wow
Crestwood Eq.
11:24:20 Ivy / poison ivy
4 types of glasses in store and sven
Crestwood Eq.
11:22:50 Ivy / poison ivy
quests
Alpine Acres
11:21:04 Lily/Alpine
Focused stuff
Crestwood Eq.
11:21:01 Ivy / poison ivy
same
Alpine Acres
11:20:53 Lily/Alpine
Doing some RO planning *-*

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Sunni
11:32:27 Sunni bunny
She got very very lucky, she was sleeping on the back deck, and it didn't fall any lower.
The back deck is stable but damaged and the roof on the deck is damaged but the roof to the house looks good
She warned the property own the tree was dead and gonna fall.
They didn't listen and the city said they couldn't do anything.
Crestwood Eq.
11:30:53 Ivy / poison ivy
i have 81k in my RO savings. now to save another 1 mil or so in the next week. easy peasy. /jokingggg
Calela Eventing
11:30:47 Cali
Sunni
Oh! Is she alright?
Sunni
11:30:09 Sunni bunny
Am back haha, sorry.
I'll be popping on and off, I tree fell on my aunt's house so we are trying to help her.
Milo Ridge
11:28:46 Milo | KNN Breeder
Sorry, meant to be from Cali lol
Milo Ridge
11:28:29 Milo | KNN Breeder
I just finished up an auction and a big art sale so I can afford some more but most of the glasses I need I have already bought
Alpine Acres
11:28:26 Lily/Alpine
Almost saved all I'm going to need for RO :)
Alpine Acres
11:28:08 Lily/Alpine
Ivy, it really works!
Crestwood Eq.
11:27:56 Ivy / poison ivy
Lily

i should do that.....
Alpine Acres
11:27:37 Lily/Alpine
Ivy, I put all my money is dedicated savings accounts so I don't spend it all xD
Crestwood Eq.
11:27:02 Ivy / poison ivy
i need yall's pay grade xD
Crestwood Eq.
11:26:47 Ivy / poison ivy
Cali

i wish. im broke in store creds and dont have enough ebs to buy enough creds
Alpine Acres
11:25:43 Lily/Alpine
just snagged a Mv glass
Calela Eventing
11:25:37 Cali
Ivy
I know! We're all buying them!!
Crestwood Eq.
11:24:27 Ivy / poison ivy
wow
Crestwood Eq.
11:24:20 Ivy / poison ivy
4 types of glasses in store and sven
Crestwood Eq.
11:22:50 Ivy / poison ivy
quests
Alpine Acres
11:21:04 Lily/Alpine
Focused stuff
Crestwood Eq.
11:21:01 Ivy / poison ivy
same
Alpine Acres
11:20:53 Lily/Alpine
Doing some RO planning *-*

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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