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Barbury Estates
11:15:36 Amelia
gosh dang It I forgot I don't have premium
Angels angels
11:14:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Pheezy
You can pm me :)
pandemoniu_m
11:13:52 pheezy
Can someone PM me and help me review matches for this girl?
-HEE Click-

I have 4 matches but I don't know if theyre passable and the person who i was supposed to get a straw from hasnt been active so Im starting to get desperate :,)
Angels angels
11:13:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol
That one is pretty easy
Rainbow
11:13:19 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
I was going to ask what a double white was, lol!
Barbury Estates
11:13:03 Amelia
double premium white foal whoops
Barbury Estates
11:12:45 Amelia
now to breed a double white premium foal X_x
Angels angels
11:12:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yay!
Barbury Estates
11:11:50 Amelia
I did it!
Niallator Acres
11:05:51 Ivy - Niallator side
back
Angels angels
11:03:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Got one right here
Angels angels
11:02:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Amelia
Yep they do lol
Barbury Estates
11:01:52 Amelia
do ChCh horses exist? I cant find any for a quest ?
Crestwood Eq.
11:01:32 Ivy / poison ivy
I'll be right back guys!
Crestwood Eq.
11:01:19 Ivy / poison ivy
Min <3

Im ok! We had a fun swim practice yesterday! Hopefully we will have fun practices today and tomorrow. (We are going on a two week break T-T). My birthday is monday, so i'm excited about that! And, one of my cousins and his band, MOAB, are making an album! They are pretty much rock, and I'm hardcore pop. But, their latest single is AMAZING! I'm not kidding! my cousin is the lead guitarist.
Minerva
10:57:38 Min
Hi Ivy! I'm good thank you- just can't decide whether I can be arsed to go for a hack tonight haha. How are you?
Crestwood Eq.
10:56:19 Ivy / poison ivy
Yes, pinecone is adorable
Crestwood Eq.
10:56:08 Ivy / poison ivy
Min!


What's up my Sphinx of a lynx?
Lynx Glory
10:54:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ivy!

thank you glacier <33
Minerva
10:52:03 Min
Hmm today feels like brave breeding day

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Barbury Estates
11:15:36 Amelia
gosh dang It I forgot I don't have premium
Angels angels
11:14:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Pheezy
You can pm me :)
pandemoniu_m
11:13:52 pheezy
Can someone PM me and help me review matches for this girl?
-HEE Click-

I have 4 matches but I don't know if theyre passable and the person who i was supposed to get a straw from hasnt been active so Im starting to get desperate :,)
Angels angels
11:13:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol
That one is pretty easy
Rainbow
11:13:19 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
I was going to ask what a double white was, lol!
Barbury Estates
11:13:03 Amelia
double premium white foal whoops
Barbury Estates
11:12:45 Amelia
now to breed a double white premium foal X_x
Angels angels
11:12:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yay!
Barbury Estates
11:11:50 Amelia
I did it!
Niallator Acres
11:05:51 Ivy - Niallator side
back
Angels angels
11:03:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Got one right here
Angels angels
11:02:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Amelia
Yep they do lol
Barbury Estates
11:01:52 Amelia
do ChCh horses exist? I cant find any for a quest ?
Crestwood Eq.
11:01:32 Ivy / poison ivy
I'll be right back guys!
Crestwood Eq.
11:01:19 Ivy / poison ivy
Min <3

Im ok! We had a fun swim practice yesterday! Hopefully we will have fun practices today and tomorrow. (We are going on a two week break T-T). My birthday is monday, so i'm excited about that! And, one of my cousins and his band, MOAB, are making an album! They are pretty much rock, and I'm hardcore pop. But, their latest single is AMAZING! I'm not kidding! my cousin is the lead guitarist.
Minerva
10:57:38 Min
Hi Ivy! I'm good thank you- just can't decide whether I can be arsed to go for a hack tonight haha. How are you?
Crestwood Eq.
10:56:19 Ivy / poison ivy
Yes, pinecone is adorable
Crestwood Eq.
10:56:08 Ivy / poison ivy
Min!


What's up my Sphinx of a lynx?
Lynx Glory
10:54:43 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ivy!

thank you glacier <33
Minerva
10:52:03 Min
Hmm today feels like brave breeding day

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Art criticism January 13, 2024 02:57 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Please offer me advice! Working on ibis paint with an iPad and stylus
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Edited at January 13, 2024 02:59 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 02:55 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Still looking for advice + pricing suggestions. Thank you :)
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:07 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Doubt post sorry!

Edited at January 16, 2024 03:30 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:16 PM


Amethyst Ranch
 
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I'd definitely say you could be in low tier 1 :) The hair in piece 1 and 3 is amazing <3
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:22 PM


The Unknown
 
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The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.

Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:24 PM


Sweetwater Creek
 
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I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:31 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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The Unknown said:

The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.



I repaint the whole horse depending if I like the face or not lol.
I would love shadow advice - I can never place them right I think I just don't understand light xD
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:32 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Sweetwater Creek said:
I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!


Awesome thanks a million! I really neglect the bodies of my horses which is totally my bad
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:38 PM


Zomb
 
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I personally would say high T2. I love the feel of them! But as stated above, the shadowing feels off for me. I like the lighting on the horse, some soft shadows would define them even more (if you haven't already). Along side the lack of definition in the body with muscles etc etc. but that's easily fixable with a chalk pen + a soft light layer (one for light another for shadows). I think if you could work on those two (happy to help where I can) you definitely would be T1 without a doubt :)
Art criticism March 31, 2024 02:21 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Really interested for critique and thought on this:

Based on this forum I tried to focus on muscling through the body. I hope I've improved a bit.

Edited at June 2, 2024 07:37 AM by Enoki Valley

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