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Sunset River Arabian
12:49:34 Athena - AAs
I should catch up on all my palettes. I have at least 20 art pieces that need one lol
Alpine Acres
12:41:35 Lily
Night all
Calela Eventing
12:40:40 Cali
Oh well, I'm going to go now. Enjoy having no Stained Glass horses in raid lol
Alpine Acres
12:40:31 Lily
Cali
we appreciate your generosity :D
Calela Eventing
12:39:18 Cali
Can't get over the 6 Stained glass horse pieces I've put in over these few rounds
Love putting in good things.
Its giving Eve
Alpine Acres
12:38:05 Lily
me too lol
Calela Eventing
12:37:26 Cali
Thanks! You too, Alpine (winks in all knowingness of Red being Alpines other acc)
Love typing to the same people as if they're on different accs
Alpine Acres
12:36:46 Lily
Good luck Cali :)
Redwood Ridge
12:36:28 
Cali
oooh that's exciting! Good luck!
Calela Eventing
12:35:23 Cali
Alpine
That's great! I'm using my first WWW straw
I have such expectations... that I am going to be disappointed by knowing RF but its fineeeeee
Alpine Acres
12:34:15 Lily
Cali
I'm also really excited, going to be using an embryo for the first time :)
Calela Eventing
12:33:07 Cali
Can't wait for RO
Have some big plans... and just realised I typed this on the wrong acc oops. Meant to be from Cali but whatever
WRS Sweet Hollow
12:27:39 
Oh! Cool!
Sunset River Arabian
12:27:33 Athena - AAs
I'm honestly not looking forward to RO. I don't know why
Milo Ridge
12:24:47 Calis SA
You use it to help with certain aspects of your horses training.
For example is you breed two horses together but they both suck in Movement then you put a Movement glass into the breeding so the foal will be better
WRS Sweet Hollow
12:23:30 
What is Stained Glass?
Alpine Acres
12:21:39 Lily
Thanks Cali, this is fun :D
Milo Ridge
12:21:09 Calis SA
Stained glass went in again
Feeling so generous :)
Wild_Potatoes
12:21:08 
-HEE Click-
Ok hello 😂
Wild_Potatoes
12:20:23 
Ohhh

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Sunset River Arabian
12:49:34 Athena - AAs
I should catch up on all my palettes. I have at least 20 art pieces that need one lol
Alpine Acres
12:41:35 Lily
Night all
Calela Eventing
12:40:40 Cali
Oh well, I'm going to go now. Enjoy having no Stained Glass horses in raid lol
Alpine Acres
12:40:31 Lily
Cali
we appreciate your generosity :D
Calela Eventing
12:39:18 Cali
Can't get over the 6 Stained glass horse pieces I've put in over these few rounds
Love putting in good things.
Its giving Eve
Alpine Acres
12:38:05 Lily
me too lol
Calela Eventing
12:37:26 Cali
Thanks! You too, Alpine (winks in all knowingness of Red being Alpines other acc)
Love typing to the same people as if they're on different accs
Alpine Acres
12:36:46 Lily
Good luck Cali :)
Redwood Ridge
12:36:28 
Cali
oooh that's exciting! Good luck!
Calela Eventing
12:35:23 Cali
Alpine
That's great! I'm using my first WWW straw
I have such expectations... that I am going to be disappointed by knowing RF but its fineeeeee
Alpine Acres
12:34:15 Lily
Cali
I'm also really excited, going to be using an embryo for the first time :)
Calela Eventing
12:33:07 Cali
Can't wait for RO
Have some big plans... and just realised I typed this on the wrong acc oops. Meant to be from Cali but whatever
WRS Sweet Hollow
12:27:39 
Oh! Cool!
Sunset River Arabian
12:27:33 Athena - AAs
I'm honestly not looking forward to RO. I don't know why
Milo Ridge
12:24:47 Calis SA
You use it to help with certain aspects of your horses training.
For example is you breed two horses together but they both suck in Movement then you put a Movement glass into the breeding so the foal will be better
WRS Sweet Hollow
12:23:30 
What is Stained Glass?
Alpine Acres
12:21:39 Lily
Thanks Cali, this is fun :D
Milo Ridge
12:21:09 Calis SA
Stained glass went in again
Feeling so generous :)
Wild_Potatoes
12:21:08 
-HEE Click-
Ok hello 😂
Wild_Potatoes
12:20:23 
Ohhh

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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