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Amelia Stormhand
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Alpine Acres
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The Old Gods
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DragonFyre Estate
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Dash and Duchess
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Looking for T1 arts for my new filly!!
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Ambrosia
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WWE appy PON colt for sale. Pm offers
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Fantasy Horses
12:08:38 Bravery + AD ISH
Auction! SD WC foals 193
- colts and fillies
- ESubSub+ ratings
- ONLY 900 to 2k SB!
- Perfect if you're wanting to get into SD Dressage!
- Ends on the 10th at 3pm GT!
-HEE Click-
Amelia Stormhand
12:01:35 Handy
Need gone, chimera (I think)

-HEE Click-
Pegasus Lane
11:55:06 Peggy (or) Peg
-HEE Click-
My rumble entries are available to purchase! Take a peek ;)
Whitewolf
11:49:17 
WEE Combo colts for sale 3k each.
-HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
11:35:32 Lily/Alpine
WWW SH stallion for auction
-HEE Click-
The Old Gods
11:32:55 Void Malign
-HEE Click- SD geldings for sale, 500
DragonFyre Estate
11:27:23 Whip
WWW AALB stud for offers. No sabino and no roan on top of being a consistently higher AALB stud. PM me to discuss.
-HEE Click-
Dash and Duchess
11:25:05 T1 Artist, W+ seller
Looking for T1 arts for my new filly!!
Please PM me if you'd be interested <3
Ambrosia
11:20:02 Amb
-HEE Click-
WWE appy PON colt for sale. Pm offers
Green River Stables
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EWE AA combo mares auction
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Critique July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png
Wondering what I could do next time to improve.
I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?
Critique July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.
Critique July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png
Critique July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png


Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image
Critique July 31, 2018 04:25 AM


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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they don’t taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)
Critique July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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