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Angels angels
09:23:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nah we don't get fires down here. Way too humid lol
Sunset River Arabian
09:23:19 Athena - AAs
I used one of hers this month and got him so fingers crossed this one is just as good
-HEE Click-
Elysium Opalus
09:23:09 anti gen ai
Yeah summer is uh
Is fireworks or wildfires
Angels angels
09:23:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena
What the heack?!?
Use it woman! XD
Dash and Duchess
09:22:58 DD | ~Squizard~
Thankfully, no big fires over here (too humid) but hurricane season is upon us >.>
Sunset River Arabian
09:22:40 Athena - AAs
Angels
because I'm afraid to use them lol I have an embryo from my first WWW mare that was pulled the day/week embryos were added to the game
Angels angels
09:22:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Versa
Then you are probably on the edge like I am. We had quite a few warnings this past season and one or two watches with a rotation or two spotted, but nothing ever happened but rain lightning thunder and a little wind
CWY country
09:22:11 C
Angel, same here. I try to use my embryo's as soon as I can if I can.
Versailles
09:21:54 Versa
Bro, I remember the Marshall fire. I wanted to get to the airport and one of the roads to it was ENTIRELY covered in smoke. I won't lie, I chickened out and turned around because I couldn't tell where it came from.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:21:47 Arctic Katz
Located between the California wildfires and the Colorado/Utah wildfires
Elysium Opalus
09:21:44 anti gen ai
I watched 2012 💀
Angels angels
09:21:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I don't see how you people can have a freezer full or embryos. I am way to impatient not to use them the second they are made lmao
Versailles
09:21:01 Versa
Angel,
I got a few of them about a month ago. Warning after warning. Nothing ever touched down. But I kept the weather channel I trust open all night.
CWY country
09:20:44 C
What's been scary in Colorado this year hasn't been storms, it's been the massive wildfire's.
Sunset River Arabian
09:19:56 Athena - AAs
2 glasses to buy and I'm set for RO. I'm just going to use 4 of my old embryos. My freezers getting too crowded for my liking
Elysium Opalus
09:19:32 anti gen ai
Im located somewhere where Im close enough to get the mobile alarms but I dont get hit with anything 😭

Dont want to jinx myself though 👀
Elysium Opalus
09:17:54 anti gen ai
Colorado: we have earthquakes, landslides, and floods
Me living here for two decades having felt nothing besides my own farts: -Click-

I will say we have all those but like you said theyre sometimes all bark no bite
Angels angels
09:17:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Has your area been hit with a lot of really bad possible tornado storms with warnings and watches the past year or two?
Versailles
09:16:57 Versa
Angel,
That's totally what I mean! Like Some say no, and others say yes. I dunno who to believe, especially when multiple weather channels are disagreeing lol
Angels angels
09:15:52 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Well I could be wrong.. lol it looks like the 2025 versons of the diagrams included all of Tennessee but who knows. They are all different. You can't find a definitive answer anymore

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Angels angels
09:23:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nah we don't get fires down here. Way too humid lol
Sunset River Arabian
09:23:19 Athena - AAs
I used one of hers this month and got him so fingers crossed this one is just as good
-HEE Click-
Elysium Opalus
09:23:09 anti gen ai
Yeah summer is uh
Is fireworks or wildfires
Angels angels
09:23:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena
What the heack?!?
Use it woman! XD
Dash and Duchess
09:22:58 DD | ~Squizard~
Thankfully, no big fires over here (too humid) but hurricane season is upon us >.>
Sunset River Arabian
09:22:40 Athena - AAs
Angels
because I'm afraid to use them lol I have an embryo from my first WWW mare that was pulled the day/week embryos were added to the game
Angels angels
09:22:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Versa
Then you are probably on the edge like I am. We had quite a few warnings this past season and one or two watches with a rotation or two spotted, but nothing ever happened but rain lightning thunder and a little wind
CWY country
09:22:11 C
Angel, same here. I try to use my embryo's as soon as I can if I can.
Versailles
09:21:54 Versa
Bro, I remember the Marshall fire. I wanted to get to the airport and one of the roads to it was ENTIRELY covered in smoke. I won't lie, I chickened out and turned around because I couldn't tell where it came from.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:21:47 Arctic Katz
Located between the California wildfires and the Colorado/Utah wildfires
Elysium Opalus
09:21:44 anti gen ai
I watched 2012 💀
Angels angels
09:21:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I don't see how you people can have a freezer full or embryos. I am way to impatient not to use them the second they are made lmao
Versailles
09:21:01 Versa
Angel,
I got a few of them about a month ago. Warning after warning. Nothing ever touched down. But I kept the weather channel I trust open all night.
CWY country
09:20:44 C
What's been scary in Colorado this year hasn't been storms, it's been the massive wildfire's.
Sunset River Arabian
09:19:56 Athena - AAs
2 glasses to buy and I'm set for RO. I'm just going to use 4 of my old embryos. My freezers getting too crowded for my liking
Elysium Opalus
09:19:32 anti gen ai
Im located somewhere where Im close enough to get the mobile alarms but I dont get hit with anything 😭

Dont want to jinx myself though 👀
Elysium Opalus
09:17:54 anti gen ai
Colorado: we have earthquakes, landslides, and floods
Me living here for two decades having felt nothing besides my own farts: -Click-

I will say we have all those but like you said theyre sometimes all bark no bite
Angels angels
09:17:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Has your area been hit with a lot of really bad possible tornado storms with warnings and watches the past year or two?
Versailles
09:16:57 Versa
Angel,
That's totally what I mean! Like Some say no, and others say yes. I dunno who to believe, especially when multiple weather channels are disagreeing lol
Angels angels
09:15:52 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Well I could be wrong.. lol it looks like the 2025 versons of the diagrams included all of Tennessee but who knows. They are all different. You can't find a definitive answer anymore

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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